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Dude @L1aei what do you think?

A common misconception about "show it, don't tell it" is that provides super-detailed chapter that ruins the pacing. Writing details isn't the same as showing; telling can be super-detailed. Showing is about leaving interpretation to the reader by providing narrative clues or necessary...

My fiction remains niche on RR. I've only received two ratings after more than half a year on there without a single review. Comments are more along the lines of "TFTC." I haven't received any hate comments yet. But the good news is that views are growing organically, albeit slowly. The only...

Well, showing isn't about providing a detailed story. This is a misconception. Showing is about leaving interpretation to the reader by providing narrative clues or necessary information. The narration, "My head is throbbing, it feels like I'm being stabbed by needles..." is a concise showing...

Well, I've read 2 chapters as a casual reader who happened to pass by and read them once to gauge the immersion. My general impression is, even though you use the first POV, your narrative is still light-telling to convey the plot, characters, and worldbuilding through the MC's internal...

Honestly, I was quite surprised to find Albrecht as the MC. During the first two chapters, he didn't have the qualities of a narrative protagonist. The problem? He has very little screen time during those two chapters, and he's passive. If you want him to be a passive protagonist, you need to...

Well, immersion isn't about how the MC thinks. It's about making the reader feel like the MC. You're free to explain the MC's thoughts as long as they're relevant to your plot. The problem isn't the MC's thoughts, but how they're narrated so the reader can feel them. I don't want to change...

Well, I position myself as a casual reader who just happened to pass by and read it once to gauge immersion. My brief impression is that you managed to make me read two chapters without a break (without repeating). Your chapters are easy to read because they have a paragraph format that is...

Writing complex fiction teaches us how to complete a work as an author. Narrating fiction that resonates with readers teaches us a lifelong lesson as a storyteller.

Well, I'm giving feedback as a casual reader. I usually only read once to gauge immersion. But this time I relaxed the reading restrictions by reading the chapter several times. I only finished 2 chapters. Here are my honest impression: (1) Your paragraph format is too long. Long paragraphs...

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Journey of A New Author... Every author begins writing fiction with the first ink stroke (or finger tap). Even best-selling authors... began their journey by learning to write fiction. Therefore, what differentiates between stablished authors and new authors is simply "experience." When it...