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  1. Eldoria

    thank you all for your help

    Please share a link to your fiction. Let other members judge it. Dude, they really made up random account names. They're just showing off their stupidity.
  2. Eldoria

    Story sharing.

    I see... a little daughter is cute.
  3. Eldoria

    If you have time, could you please give me some feedback

    Sorry, sis (or dude?). I suggested your feedback thread to the people offering feedback because I thought they would actually HELP you. But I was wrong. They were just talking nonsense, promoting a hidden scheme. Instead of providing constructive feedback that can be read openly on the forum...
  4. Eldoria

    Story sharing.

    Why did you choose the sequel, dude?
  5. Eldoria

    Story sharing.

    I have a lot of unfinished fiction. Please check out this thread: https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/help-me-determine-writing-the-priority-of-fiction-works-based-on-the-storys-premises.26432/
  6. Eldoria

    Feedback on my first chapter

    Not good, dude. I only read it once, positioning myself as a causal reader to gauge immersion. Here are my honest impressions: (1) The chapter is too heavy-telling. You give an intro recap of the hero's journey seeking recognition... I thought it would be a hero chronicle with thrilling and...
  7. Eldoria

    I reread my old fiction collection and discovered... I couldn't enjoy it anymore. It wasn't...

    I reread my old fiction collection and discovered... I couldn't enjoy it anymore. It wasn't because the content was bad, but because the narrative was flat, breaking my immersion. This is the curse of knowledge. As your tastes become better, you can no longer enjoy the dishes you once enjoyed...
  8. Eldoria

    Re Zero is more enjoyable as an anime than as a LN. I read the LN and felt dizzy because of the...

    Re Zero is more enjoyable as an anime than as a LN. I read the LN and felt dizzy because of the plot.
  9. Eldoria

    At least you're honest about your reading experience. The technical aspects are just a bonus...

    At least you're honest about your reading experience. The technical aspects are just a bonus. Not everyone has the time to write technical stuff.
  10. Eldoria

    It's nice... I'm not a smoker (I'm allergic to tobacco). Lol

    It's nice... I'm not a smoker (I'm allergic to tobacco). Lol
  11. Eldoria

    Exactly. You're a truly good teacher. I can see that in your humility when it comes to feedback.

    Exactly. You're a truly good teacher. I can see that in your humility when it comes to feedback.
  12. Eldoria

    I will provide suggestions. But whether those suggestions are implemented or not... that's the...

    I will provide suggestions. But whether those suggestions are implemented or not... that's the author's decision. The reviewer's job is simply to provide an honest assessment based on their experience.
  13. Eldoria

    @Hans.Trondheim Agree. Besides, I always state my position as a causal reader. I don't claim...

    @Hans.Trondheim Agree. Besides, I always state my position as a causal reader. I don't claim my feedback is the best, but I am honest about my reading experience when evaluating a narrative.
  14. Eldoria

    @Tabula_Rasa I agree with you. Constructive feedback isn't about preaching or changing an...

    @Tabula_Rasa I agree with you. Constructive feedback isn't about preaching or changing an artistic vision. It's more about how to tell an effective story. By the way, I didn't know threads could be deleted?! I've created many threads and haven't found the "delete" button yet.
  15. Eldoria

    People will organically appreciate what we stand for instead of being busy showing off who we...

    People will organically appreciate what we stand for instead of being busy showing off who we are. Give honest feedback to anyone who needs it... instead of showing your professional title for 1 page.
  16. Eldoria

    College Admission Exam in 3 days ?

    I just say, "Good luck!"
  17. Eldoria

    Need feedback only on this chapter 1

    Here's my opinion. Asking for ratings isn't biased as long as you know what you're trying to measure in your narrative. I've created two feedback threads with scale-based ratings. But I know what I'm measuring. I use ratings to gauge readers' perceived comprehension of the narrative provided...
  18. Eldoria

    Need feedback only on this chapter 1

    Dude, your review is probably equal to or longer than the chapter. :blob_salute:
  19. Eldoria

    This is just an incidental incident. It's too early to draw conclusions. But I'll be monitoring it.

    This is just an incidental incident. It's too early to draw conclusions. But I'll be monitoring it.
  20. Eldoria

    Japanese visitors have been around for a long time on SH. My first commenter was also from...

    Japanese visitors have been around for a long time on SH. My first commenter was also from Japan. Several authors I know are also from Japan. It's only been a day (or rather, I only check today). However, if the insights don't change over the next few days or weeks... perhaps Japanese visitors...
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