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I opened the insight and found a sudden surge in views from Japan, even displacing the US. Are Japanese readers starting to flood SH?

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You're quite sharp even though you've only read 3 chapters. My fiction isn't just a story of a single mother raising a sweet little daughter; it's true that the Marry-Caelan relationship is the emotional core of the story. But behind the words "just want to live in peace"... there will be a...

The law of exclusivity also applies... fiction in a particular genre might be popular on a particular platform, but that doesn't necessarily mean it'll be popular on others. For example, smut fiction is popular here but is strictly restricted in RR. Or, conversely, epic fantasy lit-RPG fiction...

Yes, there is. Who's work is it? Please check my signature. My fiction can't be called popular, but for a niche... the engagement isn't bad. My fiction is a dark fantasy of motherhood in a post-memory apocalypse world. It's a nobledark that values domestic life over global peace. It's...

I love you, Mommy. :blob_aww:

That's great. Honest feedback is more valuable than mere praise. Praise makes you happy. But honest feedback improves your narrative.

This further emphasizes why feedback (from human readers) is necessary. Authors' writing is generally intended for readers. An effective method for measuring how effectively a narrative is perceived by readers is to test it directly with them. What an author understands isn't necessarily what...

It's almost 100k words. It's great.

Writer bias is real. It explains why writers repeat the same mistakes even after reading dozens of creative writing books.

Here's my advice... instead of showing off who you are, show off what you're capable of! Take a fiction that really needs feedback. Read it, analyze it, and write constructive, understandable, and applicable suggestions for the author to improve the narrative. That way, you'll truly...

I want to save the sentences as a quote. Thanks

Dude, I understand your feeling. Any similarities are purely coincidental. :blob_aww: Besides, I'm also rewriting my fiction. If I'd known my narrative flaws from the start... I wouldn't have had to go through the trouble of rewriting tens of chapters to make the narrative more readable...

My question is, what kind of feedback would you like to improve your narrative?

Your Lie in April :blob_aww:

Don't oversimplify the issue. Deep POV isn't just about showing. Deep POV is about high-level immersion. Do you know the narrative distance between the reader and the MC? Even with a limited third POV, you can still write with the reader positioned as a neutral observer, rather than trying to...

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