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She was a little girl who was too innocent to kill those uncles without realizing it. Lol

Dude, I'm not sure if I can help you build an organic comedy. Try reading this chapter. It's a dark comedy. I've never seen a reader smile after reading it. So, this chapter may help you or may not. Just read it and see how you feel after finishing this chapter?

What? Arin is a son?! ? Well, my perception is really biased. I've read the manhwa with Heroine whiny that made me exaspered named Arin.

Well, this is my honest opinion. I always position myself as a casual reader who only reads once and doesn't repeat. So, my assessment may be biased. First, could you provide a friendly format chapter for this thread? I know when the original chapter is copied into the thread, the lines become...

Honestly... my work is not about depression. My work is more about the love of a mother who does not want to pass on her past trauma to her little daughter even though the world is still dark. The little daughter is truly innocent. If you read from the little daughter's POV... you will know...

I told you.... you should follow your ninja way. :blob_teary:

I don't want to explain it. I want you to follow the ninja path... meaning the author's path according to your preference.

I'll call @Racosharko to assess it. I'm pretty sure your comment is still polite.

I'm pretty sure my work won't be popular. However, that won't stop me continuing to write it.

If you want your work to become popular quickly, follow current trends. If you want your work to be well known, build a brand with a unique characteristic. Tolkien needed almost two decades to be well known after the release of the first work... and it took almost a century to dominate the...

Actually, the recipe you described is already common knowledge. It's quite easy to guess based on the pattern of trending works. However, some authors here just write based on what they like rather than following trends. It's more a matter of artistic choice. Every author has artistic...

I hug my mom and say, "I love you, mom".

Yagami Light :blob_aww:

A good title is one that doesn't misunderstand the reader. You get my point. :blob_hide:

A good narrative is not a narrative that makes the reader remember all the characters in one reading, but rather makes the reader understand who the MC is, who the antagonist is, who the supporting characters are, what they are doing because of the related conflicts in their world.

It worked

Check your answer field in the text editor (here). There's a crossed-out eye symbol; that's a spoiler tag.

I don't want to be a nag. But I've provided constructive feedback (as best I could) after reading your novel. If you ignore my advice, that's fine. But look, other members are complaining about your constant request for feedback when you're reluctant to act on it. Are you trying to embarrass...