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    Writing Who is the character you use as the gold standard in narrating the main antagonist in your fiction?

    Who is the character you use as the gold standard in narrating the main antagonist in your fiction?
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    All to serve identity

    Please read Sophie's World
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    Story change - game-like mechanics

    No link, no feedback...
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    If 4 factors could converge in a story: I'm pretty sure... a work would explode quickly and...

    If 4 factors could converge in a story: I'm pretty sure... a work would explode quickly and start a new trend. Unfortunately, 4 factors rarely align. Most works only fulfill 1 or 2 factors at a time. It's why masterpieces often become hidden gems. While, other works can quickly go viral.
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    I love reading poetic prose with personification, as atmospheres such as: Silence speaks...

    I love reading poetic prose with personification, as atmospheres such as: Silence speaks louder than screams... Mist carry the breath of changing eras... The sun peeks through the leaves... The moon bears witness between you and me... Blood never lies...
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    I Write. You Relax.

    I write because I want... I don't write because I don't want...
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    Well, it is that oddity that makes you know who he is.

    Well, it is that oddity that makes you know who he is.
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    You know who he is, right?

    You know who he is, right?
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    Writing mystery fiction is one of the most difficult challenges. You need to set the vibe through atmosphere, spread neat foreshadowing from chapter 1, have a clear plot from beginning to end, control the tension, and provide the reveal (payoff) at the right moment. For example, imagine a...
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    Opening Scene

    Well, this is a pretty good opening for a prologue. You immediately build tension right from the start with a character having a seizure. That's quite engaging for me as a causal reader... I wonder what happens to that character?
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    Help

    Try RR, dude. It works for your work.
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    POV isn't just about I, you, we, they, he/she, it... but POV is the reader's lens to enter...

    POV isn't just about I, you, we, they, he/she, it... but POV is the reader's lens to enter (perceive) the story. If you're writing a limited third POV, narrate it like you're writing how a character experiences the life in their world... and use that lens consistently.
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    Is the power of love the key to popularity?

    I prefer female characters in my fiction to be bound by a relationship called a "sisterhood." They genuinely care because they feel bound by a similar fate and struggle.
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    Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open]

    I don't know why but when you appear, your presence makes me smile. :meowsip:
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    Is this alright or it need more polish.

    Dude... please enter your thread into the feedback section so that other authors can easily find it.
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    I'm just a casual reader who is honest about my experiences while reading, sis. :blob_hide:

    I'm just a casual reader who is honest about my experiences while reading, sis. :blob_hide:
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    Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers?

    Dude... please listen his explanation @L1aei :
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    Need feedback on my revised chapter 1.

    Yes, more or less like that. Insert descriptions within the actions. But don't overdo it; just include one or two character traits per action. Please read my thread for an example.
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