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  1. Eldoria

    Tried my hand at some shounen

    Thanks, sis :blob_salute:
  2. Eldoria

    Tried my hand at some shounen

    It's almost impossible for the new member not to see my feedback. I wrote it yesterday, and today the person asked for honest feedback in the open feedback thread. I don't mind that my feedback wasn't accepted... I already mentioned my feedback might be biased in the notes. But ignoring the...
  3. Eldoria

    Tried my hand at some shounen

    Well, I'll write feedback once I'm in a better mood. I still feel bad, especially after writing such honest feedback to a new member who didn't even react, as if my feedback was just empty air. :blob_teary:
  4. Eldoria

    Please don't send feedback requests if the author isn't prepared to accept criticism. If the...

    Please don't send feedback requests if the author isn't prepared to accept criticism. If the author wants to improve the narrative, they should be prepared to accept flaws. Reading, analyzing, writing a feeback and being honest while appreciating the work is exhausting, voluntary work...
  5. Eldoria

    Tried my hand at some shounen

    Sorry, my feedback may have been too honest and harsh. I'm considering not giving feedback this time after reading your manuscript.
  6. Eldoria

    Tried my hand at some shounen

    Just to make sure the discussion is going well... what aspect of your writing would you like feedback on? People might make random comments if you just ask, "What do you think about it?"
  7. Eldoria

    Sorry, I'm not your mommy...

    Sorry, I'm not your mommy...
  8. Eldoria

    A glass of warm milk in cold weather feels incredibly delicious. :meowsip:

    A glass of warm milk in cold weather feels incredibly delicious. :meowsip:
  9. Eldoria

    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    Please try this, dude. https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/help-me-measure-the-readers-perception-of-character-identifier.26758/
  10. Eldoria

    Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open]

    Wow... I've read it before. Last year, I marathoned until 90 chapters. It's a light fantasy and a great read to relax with. Trust me. Dude, I already gave you the honest feedback you wanted but you didn't even respond me. :blob_teary:
  11. Eldoria

    Forum Mafia OOC thread

    Just delete one answer
  12. Eldoria

    Welcome

    Welcome
  13. Eldoria

    What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author?

    It's not like that, dude. The best feedback for you isn't necessarily the best for me or for them. Praising feedback can feel good for one author. But for another, it doesn't help improve the narrative. This thread aims to broaden our perspective on what constitutes the best feedback... and...
  14. Eldoria

    I'm offering myself for the critics

    Well, dude, I’ve read two chapters so far. I positioned myself as a casual reader who just happened to come across your work and read it once without rereading, to measure immersion. My general impression is this: your chapters tend to use an absurd, satirical narrator through an omniscient...
  15. Eldoria

    Please leave a review of my novel.

    Well, I can see the results of your hard work. People say, writing fiction is about art and feeling. But I would say, writing fiction is about narrative competence that anyone can learn. Your fiction writing is proof. I'm quite confident in terms of quality, your fiction deserves to be in the...
  16. Eldoria

    What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author?

    Dude, he wrote an essay (or fan letter?) for you. Lol :blob_cookie:
  17. Eldoria

    I Would really appreciate a review on my work!

    You can edit your thread.
  18. Eldoria

    I Would really appreciate a review on my work!

    Just change your title. Don't create multiple threads anytime soon. I'm afraid you'll be considered a bot.
  19. Eldoria

    I Would really appreciate a review on my work!

    Well, I'll give you an unspoken rule here. If you ask forum members to read your fiction, they might consider you using the feedback thread for a covert promotional activity, which is generally frowned upon by members. However, if you sincerely ask for feedback to improve your narrative and...
  20. Eldoria

    I Would really appreciate a review on my work!

    Dude, you are in SH.
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