Competitive straightforward biased blunt reviewer here

[Juia_Darkcrest]

Reported for racism, you will soon be banned. Tell the RoyalRoad people who sent you there.

Reported for misleading and inflammatory comments.

Ducks are not a race; they are a number 11 on the menu at my favourite restaurant.

 

[L1aei]

Reported for racism, you will soon be banned. Tell the RoyalRoad people who sent you there.

Speciesism.

 

[Juia_Darkcrest]

Speciesism.

They have cute little feet, though.

Actually, I went down a rabbit hole of watching ducks running around a house the other day, sliding all over the floor as they chased the person holding the camera. Was adorable.

 

[Nolff]

They have cute little feet, though.

Actually, I went down a rabbit hole of watching ducks running around a house the other day, sliding all over the floor as they chased the person holding the camera. Was adorable.

Sh*t. You reminded me of that one time I was being chased by swans. I hate them. They're too fast for my liking.

 

[Conqueror_Quack]

Speciesism.

Fuck you this honoured one is never wrong, how dare you try to correct me you philandering pile of rancid excrement. I will have your teeth pulled hair plucked by goats even on your crotch and I won't stop there tlrahhh i willl make you listen to the ai generated sloppy audio of @SenseiHusky 's novel again and again while I climb onto your shoulders and look into your beautiful eyes then strip you naked and lick your abs *ahem* i will kill you and ressirect you only to and skin you alive.

Reported for misleading and inflammatory comments.

Ducks are not a race; they are a number 11 on the menu at my favourite restaurant.

Sh*t. You reminded me of that one time I was being chased by swans. I hate them. They're too fast for my liking.

You deserved it

 

[L1aei]

Fuck you this honoured one is never wrong, how dare you try to correct me you philandering pile of rancid excrement. I will have your teeth pulled hair plucked by goats even on your crotch and I won't stop there tlrahhh i willl make you listen to the ai generated sloppy audio of @SenseiHusky 's novel again and again while I climb onto your shoulders and look into your beautiful eyes then strip you naked and lick your abs *ahem* i will kill you and ressirect you only to and skin you alive.

See, here's the thing about ducks that I don't like... actually, let me point it out vaguely. The females? Do you want to know what they had to counter-adapt against for their species to even survive the next generation? I'll give you a hint: it spirals in the opposite direction and even has dead-ends.

 

[Nolff]

@Conqueror_Quack Now that you said the guy's name...

Where the f*ck is he?

Been waiting for him to reply to me. Oh f*cking hell.

Just so you know guy, I won't be able to reply as fast as I could like an hour ago, because I am now on a different device. I'm back on my 2gb ram laptop. If I somehow don't reply to you guys, just wait, I'm probably still waiting for the laptop to actually not freeze at my command.

 

[Doctah_Quack]

See, here's the thing about ducks that I don't like... actually, let me point it out vaguely. The females? Do you want to know what they had to counter-adapt against for their species to even survive the next generation? I'll give you a hint: it spirals in the opposite direction and even has dead-ends.

Lies bullshit this is all just anti duck propaganda spread by @pangmida !

 

[L1aei]

Lies bullshit this is all just anti duck propaganda spread by @pangmida !

Oh, you just tossed gasoline to douse the flames there, quackster.

 

[Nolff]

Calling a duck Quackster is mad work.

I am saluting from the sidelines. Go on, continue the fight, don't mind me.

 

[L1aei]

Calling a duck Quackster is mad work.

I am saluting from the sidelines. Go on, continue the fight, don't mind me.

Yeah, and now I'm questioning whether to duck or not to duck when the ducks start flying.

 

[Nevafrost]

I am now on a different device. I'm back on my 2gb ram laptop. If I somehow don't reply to you guys, just wait, I'm probably still waiting for the laptop to actually not freeze at my command.

Same reason why I sometimes give likes instead of haha. My phone tends to function on its own will.

 

[Nolff]

Yeah, and now I'm questioning whether to duck or not to duck when the ducks start flying.

Great pun, might steal later.

 

[Peagreene]

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2176067/a-womans-desire/

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2176004/the-impossible/

Have away, Jaws.

 

[Nolff]

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2176067/a-womans-desire/

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2176004/the-impossible/

Have away, Jaws.

I see the word "womans".

My boner is delighted, yet my grammar demon screams in agony.
Piling it up to my reading lists. Gonna spew the review after the other books.

Oh and, @Juia_Darkcrest.

Your fanfic ideas are insane, I love it. Some words may be misspelled, but that's okay. As long as I get to understand what you're trying to convey, I like it. Not to mention the quirkiness you gave to the old man. Good old man with regular pervy thoughts and always keeping cool of his boner. Good character. Even though I don't know a singular character of some series you threw inside there, I still find joy when reading it.

Good job. 7.5/10. If the misspelling weren't there, I'd give you 8.

 

[Juia_Darkcrest]

I see the word "womans".

My boner is delighted, yet my grammar demon screams in agony.
Piling it up to my reading lists. Gonna spew the review after the other books.

Oh and, @Juia_Darkcrest.

Your fanfic ideas are insane, I love it. Some words may be misspelled, but that's okay. As long as I get to understand what you're trying to convey, I like it. Not to mention the quirkiness you gave to the old man. Good old man with regular pervy thoughts and always keeping cool of his boner. Good character. Even though I don't know a singular character of some series you threw inside there, I still find joy when reading it.

Good job. 7.5/10. If the misspelling weren't there, I'd give you 8.

hah thanks!

As I said, I need to go over it with Grammarly. Not sure which misspelling you are referring to, but it is plausible that the other readers missed a couple as well on their read-throughs.

 

[SenseiHusky]

My bad guys

 

[Nolff]

My bad guys

oh shit, you're here.

What'd you said just now?

hah thanks!

As I said, I need to go over it with Grammarly. Not sure which misspelling you are referring to, but it is plausible that the other readers missed a couple as well on their read-throughs.

The beginning chaps.
@Bimbanana

I would say, your story is great, for all the right reasons. Not the prose, not the grammar, but the characters, the dialogues, and the overall plot is a form of comedy people could read and laugh at. It's great for its purpose, and I appreciated that you focus solely on making the dialogues funny but natural. Highly recommended. 7.9/10.
Reminder that I have not read the entirety of the story, just the first chapter and I can already see how the plot's gonna go.

 

[AliceMoonvale]

Better not forget me.

 

[SenseiHusky]

oh shit, you're here.

What'd you said just now?

The beginning chaps.
@Bimbanana

I would say, your story is great, for all the right reasons. Not the prose, not the grammar, but the characters, the dialogues, and the overall plot is a form of comedy people could read and laugh at. It's great for its purpose, and I appreciated that you focus solely on making the dialogues funny but natural. Highly recommended. 7.9/10.
Reminder that I have not read the entirety of the story, just the first chapter and I can already see how the plot's gonna go.

Is my story good as a plot

Lies bullshit this is all just anti duck propaganda spread by @pangmida !

Ducks are goats, my husky salutes them when he sees them