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It just means they'll grow into it, right? Right?

https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=olive This... is actually spot on for my hetero twink sheepie.

This thread is ancient, @Alfir . But on topic, using healing magic to make someone's body undergo rapid mutations/cancerous growth would be a horrible torture method that'd break the strongest of peoples. There's just something incredibly wrong about seeing your form twisted beyond...

Hi, hi! I have returned, I promised I would, though I am very late. I understand that it may be a stylistic choice, but I’d gently consider that you refine your approach somehow or rethink it. When you do things like this: and It creates unnecessary distance between characters and actions...

"The Coal Fish" works perfectly in my opinion, especially since its business front is a tavern (The Salty Spitoon, Ye Olde Fighting Cocks). You've also enticed me with your monster girl MC, expect a visit...

I'm currently burning through my feedback obligations as I speak, so it may take a bit to get to you, but I want to get to you. I enjoy just about every genre save for Westerns (and even then, I'll read a good one). My own story is an nsfw litRPG with action aspects that's extremely light on the...

It's the 2017 Will Smith Film I believe. https://www.imdb.com/title/tt5519340/ I agree, urban fantasy is a neat aesthetic, but Bright itself would have fared much better as a show series than a movie, it moves too fast, and the execution suffered for it.

There are simply too many aspects of what a skilled fighter does vs an unskilled one to provide a fix-all here buuuuuut. You could have James oversell his attacks, big windwups and lots of overcommitment. Where a boxer would throw a jab, James would throw a haymaker, that kind of stuff. He'd...

Look at a bunch of old epic voice guy trailers. No seriously. You'll want the synopsis to be entertaining itself with a bunch of fireworks and ribbons that scream HEY COME CLOSER THERE'S FUN HERE, much in the same way that we smut writers will sometimes put scantily clad pieces of eye candy...

You would lewd the Ur-Quan? Kinky

I judge people who ask for the honest opinions of their audience, only to lash out when they get a whiff of negativity. Were you so confident in your prowess that you'd open yourself up to the truth and expect sugar and rainbows? Please. People dump on the "greats" like Steven King all. The...

As a species, we've been doing backwards, contemptible, dark "unnatural", stuff since before the beginning of history, comes with being intelligent enough to go against our biological programming. I'd say we're equally as nuts as we've always been, it's just getting publicized more, and our...

You fight like a dairy farmer!

I... understand, but it took me a while. And I took French in highschool (but US language education is very, very, very bad.)

I too, enjoy MILFs. They are very soft to hug, and in general, super affectionate (or maybe I'm just selective?). I mean, sure sex is nice, but have you ever just cuddled with someone 10 years older than you for an hour?

Aye, he's a boy. I wanted something slightly androgenous and cute because he's a diminutive sheep daemon. Also, I see where you're coming from, cultural differences muddy up the lines between feminine and masculine sounds.

Meh, it's a masculine Welsh name. It checks out for me. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cecil_(given_name) Then again, I named my protagonist Olive...

Ya did it again! The issue here isn't that the sentence isn't grammatically correct (it is correct save for the need for a comma after nobility). It's that when paired with the rest of the paragraph it comes out as choppy and overly laconic because you've used an entire fullstop on a very...

I understand the will to reject overly PC stuff, really I do, but... Eh. When I was a kid playing Phantasy Star Online 2 with unofficial translation buddies (I piggybacked and did no work to advance the project at all, like most people on Ship 2) I got pulled aside by a Japanese girl (or at...

Eeeehhh, be careful about using the three letter abbreviation for Japanese people, it's considered a slur on par with the N word (particularly among the military, it's WW2 slang) in some circles. But back on topic, I do think you are on to something here, but it's not always driven by a feeling...