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The proof of her existence burns on within you, in the warm, faint memory of every smile she shared, and every lesson from her you learned. That proof burns within us as well, now that you've told us about her. Like one candle lit by another. Believe me, for this is true: you're grandmother...

All the boss themes from Library of Ruina are fire.

Oh, that's lingering hurt over a severed emotional connection, just means you're a human being with FeElS Agreed to an extent. Women who want the pampering/"respect" side of ultra traditionalism (without me saying anything at all about traditionalist stuff because I'm sure we all know how I...

I mean, that's just what people do, unless you're so dedicated that you're going to dig up the dude's grave to bone the... bones. I'm a freaking lich, I have NO foot to argue, but here I am. I just fail to see how that scenario brings up NTR vibes specifically, and I fail to see why racial...

I'm having a hard time deciphering any meaning from this at all...

This is almost never ever ever the case unless we're dealing with some very convoluted writing. What story was this? I do know there was that plot point in MGS: The Phantom Pain (Or was it Ground Zeros?) where but that had severe consequences for both the perpetrator and the victim, and the act...

If ya knew how to curate the communities you embedded yourselves into, you'd significantly reduce your fedora rat encounter rate. But as a direct answer, Discord is worse. The number of targets to exploit and obscurification methods available is greater.

Just add an author's note for the translators and say that you want some kind of pipeline to speak with your foreign readers. That way you can reap whatever benefits you "lost" from having your stuff pirated, and you get a better community impression.

Hi hi. Thanks for being brave enough to present your child to me to rIp OpEn ANd exAmIne ItS guTs. I won't be gentle. First, the synopsis: This is very generic, and very vague. Sure it gives us the details we need but it does that and only that. Certain writers can get away with the "dry"...

I see. I see. Even if his character is wicked and deplorable, his actions are fun to watch. Basically The Count of Monte Cristo without the redemption arc.

Hmmmmm. Methinks that sounds like the logic a "nice guy" who buys flowers for a platonic best friend who rages when said best friend finds a boyfriend later on uses. I mean, unrequited love hurts and there is a double standard where male sufferers are called incels while females are shown in a...

I am very interested in the responses this is going to get.

Vomit draft. You basically do stream of consciousness writing in the general direction of your story, then clean it up until it becomes something good. You'll spend a lot more time editing, but you'll get your ideas out, and that's the most important thing. If you keep yourself locked up with...

Makes sense. The ouroboros bit is intreasting though, we see shit like that in real life, some people can't avoid circular "failures" of character due to stuff like anxiety disorder or past trauma, and those stories are rather interesting for me when they explore the inner worlds of the victims...

Dear lurkers, read my crappy story and GIVE ME YOUR SWEET [KROMER] I love you, thanks. Name: Deeprotsorcerer Occ: Author Notable Works: Love and Life and Lightning! Patreon Link: Patreon

Read the first two chapters of Dark Hero of Music . It's just not there yet in my opinion. Are you a current or former fanfic writer? Some of the hallmarks of the common style are there, and it's holding you back. Generally, you'll want to avoid the using the "attraction blush" in its most...

Wimpy and pathetic eh? Where do you draw that line? Body types and capabilities, or mannerisms? Like, if a scrawny person stood up to a Khornate berserker with nothing but a stick and held him off for 2 seconds, does his bravery vindicate him in your eyes?

I read the the first chapter of Shatter it just feels... underdeveloped. Like, I can tell that you put a bunch of thought into the story, it's just that we're not getting all of it on the page. More details in the chapter comments.