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Overuse and repetition words are likely due to a lack of vocabulary and a lack of editing. Web novels are rarely professionally edited due to their rapid release. And mine? It's the same... my narrative uses a lot of repetitive words that can be boring. I'll probably edit it again if...

Well, some of the details of the scenes may seem strange (what kind of crazy person would preach while fighting brutally in real life?). I admit I'm heavily inspired by LN, manga, and anime. The dramatic effects of the fights leave a lasting impression, at least on me as a reader. Although...

I appreciate your attention. I probably don't want to be too much of a bother here. So, I'll ask for a one-time read for ease of feedback. Thank you for your feedback.

No problem... you just answer the scale option 1 for hard to imagine. An honest answer is the answer I'm looking for. This is constructive feedback. Thank you for your help.

Currently I still want to analyze the visualization aspect of the scene because no matter how good the plot and characters in a battle... if the author's imagination cannot be transferred to the reader then the concept of the story will not be understood by the reader like a lecturer who...

Well, I appreciate your feedback. But again... this feedback focuses on the visual aspect of the battle scenes—how they can be "imagined" in the reader's mind. So, I won't be analyzing other aspects like readability, characters, and plot for now. Regardless, I appreciate your time and...

Thank you for your feedback. The title of this fiction is Blood Rose Princess. You can check it in my signature.

Feedback on Fight Scene Visualization Can you rate how visual the fight scenes in the following a chapter are in your mind as a reader? Please answer by selecting an answer option based on the scale provided, with or without providing a reason. The visual scale is explained below: Scale...

Well, we know the context of the joke here. I already added a LOL in the previous comment. If you felt otherwise... it might have been because my tone was formal. I apologize.

You should be proud you're not on the list... it means you're not the object of ridicule. Lol

Well, this question is simple but difficult to implement. If everyone could assess their own potential, IQ, SQ, EQ, personality tests, and the like would be unnecessary. These tests exist for a reason, due to the human tendency to overestimate or underestimate themselves. Although the...

It's difficult to talk about a writer's greatest strengths without being biased... I'll leave it up to fiction readers about my strengths and weaknesses in conveying fictional narratives.

There are two types of fiction: (1) fiction that tells what happens to the characters and (2) fiction that makes the reader feel with the characters. The first type of fiction simply asks what happens next? (linear storytelling). The second type of fiction asks how does the scene captivate...

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You don't need to ask people about your PP. You know what's best for you.

Does the fiction you're referencing refer to the fiction in your signature? If so, I suggest not uploading it to YouTube. They have strict policies regarding sensitive content, particularly regarding violence, extremism, and sexuality. Even if it were possible, you'd likely have to censor your...