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  1. Eldoria

    [Help Me] Measure the Reader's Perception of Character Identifier

    Don't think of this as a test. The results don't affect you. They indicate how well or poorly the narrative structure performs in character-dense scenes. If the score is low... it may not be the respondent's fault. Rather, it may be a narrative flaw. This feedback is useful for measuring how...
  2. Eldoria

    Would these covers attract readers?

    Let's be honest... do you like this cover? I do. But is it marketable enough to attract new readers? The answer is, not necessarily. The opinions of casual SH readers may differ. My tastes can't be generalized.
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    I use three types of POV in a series: first POV, limited third POV, and omniscient third POV...

    I use three types of POV in a series: first POV, limited third POV, and omniscient third POV. Each chapter can have a different POV. POV can change depending on the narrative's needs.
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    In limited third POV, the narrator follows the MC and shows what the MC is experiencing...

    In limited third POV, the narrator follows the MC and shows what the MC is experiencing 'subjectively'. The reader can feel the MC's breath without becoming the MC. In omniscient third POV, the narrator acts as a camera that shows the scene 'objectively' like a film director who directs what...
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    Save the cat.. :meowsip:

    Save the cat.. :meowsip:
  6. Eldoria

    Writing The thing with pronouns

    Use identity to differentiate characters. I usually insert one unique trait as a narrative guide and a reader's compass. For example, the commander's violet eyes dimmed when an idealistic knight protested the city's destruction.
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    Question!

    No one truly knows reader behavior except the reader themselves. As authors, we can only guess based on implied patterns. Personally, I've noticed a pattern... readers tend to open random chapters that entertain them rather than following a series from chapter 1 sequentially. Chapters like...
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    What are the stuff that are needed to considered while writing in third person pov.

    What is third-person POV? Limited third-person POV or omniscient third-person POV? Each has its advantages and disadvantages. In limited third-person POV, the MC's experience is more subjective and feels immersive because the reader can often feel what the MC feels on a sensory level. The...
  9. Eldoria

    That is indeed closed feedback, not opened feedback.

    That is indeed closed feedback, not opened feedback.
  10. Eldoria

    No more Praise Anon thread.

    Praising yourself?! You really know how to be narcissistic. Lol
  11. Eldoria

    This scene reminds me of the main antagonist in fiction... She experiences resurrection into a...

    This scene reminds me of the main antagonist in fiction... She experiences resurrection into a living mist disaster after being frozen alone in a pool of ice.
  12. Eldoria

    I’m staring to use Pages to store another back up of my notes

    I use Ubuntu OS, which already has a built-in word processing application equivalent to MS Word (I forget the name). It's open source and FREE.
  13. Eldoria

    You can take time anytime. Have a nice day. :blob_aww:

    You can take time anytime. Have a nice day. :blob_aww:
  14. Eldoria

    How do you view your characters in your fiction?

    Your MMC vibe is similar to my FMC, but my FMC is darker and more tragic.
  15. Eldoria

    The number 666 reminds me of something. :blob_hide:

    The number 666 reminds me of something. :blob_hide:
  16. Eldoria

    Writing How many named characters have you introduced in a single chapter?

    Eleven characters in a chapter is too dense. Without character management, readers can easily get lost and confused... about who's talking to whom and what's going on. I'm currently conducting a simple narrative experiment to gauge readers' perceptions of characters in a dense chapter. This...
  17. Eldoria

    I'm just trying to adapt to the platform within my tolerance limits.

    I'm just trying to adapt to the platform within my tolerance limits.
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