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  1. Eldoria

    I will give feedback on YOUR horror story, or story with heavy horror themes

    This format is designed to facilitate visualization of magic spells/user techniques, as is common in LitRPG. Also in the narrative world, a user's technique or magic spell isn't always spoken aloud. Some spells are only spoken inwardly (implicit). There are also spells that are spoken directly...
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    Empathy, Even When It's Tough

    My second FMC is a lens (POV) into how authors (and readers) empathize within a fictional world. Read the synopsis and see who the second FMC is defending and for what motive.
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    Oops... SH database error again. I need to back up my fictions.

    Oops... SH database error again. I need to back up my fictions.
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    Problem regarding novel I wrote in Spanish

    Use an English dictionary (such as an Oxford dictionary) to find appropriate equivalents. Translations can be more rigid and not reflect the context of your native language (e.g., English idioms and poetry differ from those in other languages). But, the most important thing is to convey the...
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    What is your story ACTUALLY about

    Post Apocalyptic Motherhood Dark Fantasy: What if the world chose to forget its saviour and its sins, while the saviour chose instead to protect her daughter’s innocence?
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    What kind of fiction quality do you want to achieve as an author?

    Emotions: The content has a depth of emotion that is relatable to the reader and can make the reader emotional, such as entertained, laughing, sad, tense, horrified, even crying.
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    One voluntary review or feedback from someone who truly cares about your fiction is a true...

    One voluntary review or feedback from someone who truly cares about your fiction is a true trophy. Why? Because someone sees your work and acknowledges it honestly and sincerely. You are seen as a wordsmith who impresses the reader. And that's worth more than 1,000 empty compliments or 100...
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    If you have time, could you please give me some feedback

    What kind of feedback are you asking for? There are two types of feedback: Feedback to increase engagement and feedback to improve content quality. For the first type of feedback, the focus is solely on how your fiction is packaged, released, and promoted. For the second type of feedback, the...
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    About Anime Genres

    The shounen genre is indeed a demographic genre aimed at early male teens. But, it's not just that... this genre also influences the tone and vibe of the story, emphasizing friendship, hope, and empathy as the strengths of the story. Nakama power and talk no jutsu are concrete...
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    Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism

    I differentiate between "appearing" humble, empathetic, and compassionate and "truly" being humble, empathetic, and compassionate. AI can learn humble, empathetic, and compassionate sentence structures from millions of datasets. As a result, AI responses appear humble, empathetic, and...
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    Would love your feedback, reviews, rating and criticism

    Dude, you don't need to be discouraged... almost everyone has made mistakes or been accused of being wrong. However, what's important is how we try to understand each other without trying to get involved in a deeper mess. Back then... my first time at SH, I wasn't just accused of using AI, but...
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    Whats your favourit dog breed?

    My dog died when I was little... Then I kept a cat but the cat died too... Then I kept a pair of canaries but they died too... Now I keep fishes... No, they don't die... They just sometimes prey on the weaker ones...
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    The cow is pink... :oops:

    The cow is pink... :oops:
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    I will give feedback on YOUR horror story, or story with heavy horror themes

    Thanks for your input on the word "female," but this usage is neutral... I've considered the words "woman" and "girl." However, I can't use those two words to refer to the community of females across all age groups, from babies, little girls, teenage girls, adult females (women), mothers and...
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    I will give feedback on YOUR horror story, or story with heavy horror themes

    In your opinion... what was the most memorable scene after closing that chapters?
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    I will give feedback on YOUR horror story, or story with heavy horror themes

    Vol 2 Chapter 77: Cold Fire Burns the City into Living Hell!! Vol 2 Chapter 78: The Return of the Black Mist Princess
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    I will give feedback on YOUR horror story, or story with heavy horror themes

    I can provide links to two chapters of the tragedy if you'd like. These chapters take place in volume 2, but they can be read as separate story or connected.
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    I will give feedback on YOUR horror story, or story with heavy horror themes

    I have chapters that are horror, brutal, heavy and sensitive... about a social revolution and a city turned into hell (a gothic city burned into molten magma).
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    Can We Raise the Reaction Cap Based on Our Trophy Score?

    Reactions are important... they're a sign of caring. Every day I receive notifications about replies to statuses or threads. If I don't react... I might be perceived as cold or indifferent for ignoring messages. On the other hand, there's also a limit to how I respond to threads... I can't...
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    How to write synopsis?

    A compelling synopsis is generally written in 200-250 words. Before you worry about word count, you need to worry about how to make readers care about your fiction through the synopsis.
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