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I kind of regret asking for feedback at this point. I had just made a post offering to do some reviews, something I like to do and figured why not ask a few others what they thought of my story. Out of the four that I asked the three that got back to me had about the same opinion, that my...

My story suck seems to be the consensus from the feedback folks on here oh well thanks for taking a look anyways.

You can take me off your feedback list I’ve gotten enough to last for a long time.

I do apologize but I may have to crush you with a tentacle if you continue to try and pilfer my treats.

That's a negative ghost rider.

Give away my ice cream inconceivable!

I’m eating ice cream because I bought it and no one will stop me.

Having the attention span of a coked out squirrel myself I can't follow anything so repetitive or not I really appreciate the things.

Nope, I honestly just looked up what they were.

I use them after every piece of dialogue and it's usually just said, asked, or replied. They help me keep track of who's talking when I'm writing and I find stories with them easier to read myself.

Oh that thing! I was over here looking around like purple what purple? I'm also a cat with the reloads especially when I post something, damn you anxiety why must you force me to worry about what people think!

First I was trying to keep it simple the dreamer is an inexplicable thing from a dimension of dreams so keeping it vague is for the best. Also Anna has no idea what's going on in the world and the book is from her perspective so I tried to make it feel like you were riding around on her shoulder...

My MC is a baby elder god that is invincible, immortal and has all of the creepy powers you'd expect the spawn of a Cthulhu like monster to have. She doesn't use her powers all that often and spend most of her time traveling around with a party of adventurers exploring the world and learning...

Do it from the start but you can't have them waving their power around constantly make some kind of plot point that they don't want to like they just want to fit in or something or they might break the universe I've seen that work.

I usually just lurk on forums to get information because I'm weird, awkward, and say strange things on a regular basis. This normally gets me lit on fire and banished to the what's wrong with you category of users.

The trick is to make the opness mostly irrelevant to the plot. Basically have most of your character's interactions have nothing to do with their power level then on occasion have them vaporize some mooks for fun.

Is this retroactive cause I've already left comments on most of your novel lol Oh and just do what you feel like I too am addicted to the notifications. Anna’s Dream | Scribble Hub

Stare off into space and do my best not to start laughing.