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I admit that you're review irritated me at first but now that I've had a few days to think about it I believe I can come up with a better response than ouch. First off thank you for the critique and for finding more grammar issues, I've been chasing those down for a year now. I'll start with...

To be honest I think I’m just describing her poorly. Which after writing 250k or so words about her adventures makes me feel kind of lame. She does have all manner of little quirks like you mentioned . Such as her loathing of shoes and undergarments as well as carrying around a pocket of candy...

Honestly Anna's one of those love her or hate her kind of characters so I get what you mean.

Anna She is the MC of my novel and is a baby elder god. She spent the first few months of her life working as a barmaid at a tavern in a port town where she developed a colorful vocabulary and a taste for ale. She was found by a party of adventurers soon after and went along with them because...

I'm bad a giving quick descriptions I forgot to post her flaws so I'll remedy that. She's incredibly creepy and weird to be around for any length of time. If you were to have a conversations with her you'd notice that she breaths at the same steady rate no matter what's going on. She also stands...

Anna She is the MC of my novel and is a baby elder god. She spent the first few months of her life working as a barmaid at a tavern in a port town where she developed a colorful vocabulary and a taste for ale. She was found by a party of adventurers soon after and went along with them because...

I'd rather wrap my tentacles around something rare but to each their own I suppose.

If you have the time would you mind checking mine out? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/554980/annas-dream/

Followed by a fifth of absinthe.

I don’t think I’ve ingested enough hallucinogenics to fill appreciate this…

Ouch, well thanks for the feedback I did ask for It I guess.

I’d like one for my story please. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/554980/annas-dream/

Anna’s Dream | Scribble Hub Let me know what you think. Also posting your feedback on the thread is good with me.

I’d appreciate any feedback you could give me. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/554980/annas-dream/

I liked it so far but honestly I can't give a review or a rating on a Prologue.

I tossed one up for you. Looking forward to your next chapter by the way.

She doesn't think that hard either so it's fine. My wife would have so many questions lol.

Wait we’re supposed to have themes in our stories? Why didn’t anyone tell me this before!

So I find myself with a bad case of writer's block and time on my hands. I've been reading people stories and commenting on them for something to do. So I figured why not do some reviews as well. Just so you know what you're getting into not only will I review your book but I'll probably...