She's a baby elder god so these things happen. I only didn't use the scene because it's part of a scrapped story arch and I couldn't figure out out to make it work with the arch I decided on going with.
I had a scene where my MC gets kidnapped she snaps and turns into a tentacle monster and proceeds to eat everyone in a fortress. I describe it all in graphic detail. I didn't end up using it in the novel though.
I've never had anyone comment on my story on any of the sites I've posted it on so I'm curious as to what you'd think of it.
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