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  1. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing Prompt Brainstorming ideas for future and new stories.

    Going back to this thread, wtf I didn't see that it says 3 lines only, guess i'mma redo that. A meta-comedy/meta humor is basically a fiction that pokes fun at itself and usually other similar stories in the genre.
  2. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing Prompt Brainstorming ideas for future and new stories.

    Setting: in a world where one half is xianxia and the other half is JP/western fantasy. Protagonist: Former college student, now the arrogant young master of that one clan at the start of the xianxia protagonist's novel that treats him like dogshit. Bloodline of a dragon that makes him...
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    Feedback + suggestions (Closed)

    Haha, well I hope I didn't take too much of your time, tbh I actually forgot I even posted here, so I didn't add any specifics, could have told you to only read a few important chapters. Ah, as for spells I don't add much details if it's something they do casually, if it adds to the chapter...
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    Weird thoughts.

    The ocean is just one big soup.
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    Feedback + suggestions (Closed)

    Thanks a lot! I'll check your edit a bit later since I woke up late and don't have much time rn That was a symbolism on how Xianxia people tend to be devious and manipulating, totally not because I was just trolling. The drugs for enlightenment was just a nod to Xianxia novels. In Acetia, the...
  6. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Anyone else gets discouraged by your average views per chapter dropping?

    I haven't been writing as long as you, but I don't really care about my views, and while I am happy about more readers and favorites, I care about the comments the most. I mean none of my chapters have 0 comments, so considering I have 43 readers I'm quite proud of that.
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    After reaching your MAX level as a human, what would your evolution choice be?

    Light novel title: The goddess made me into a demon lord who just wanna chill, but now she keeps sending all these weak ass heros against me, wtf?!
  8. Anon_Y_Mousse

    After reaching your MAX level as a human, what would your evolution choice be?

    Does it even change my physical appearance? I assume I'll probably have some illusion magic anyways. As for nature magic, I just realized exactly how far nature extends to, like I could probably summon a giant tree to impale people, but maybe the high elf Evo can control space and time because...
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    After reaching your MAX level as a human, what would your evolution choice be?

    How does high elf work? Does technology just slip out of my hands or do I go till eldritch god and just straight up fry all electronics around me. If it's the later I'm going with that since it's cool. Also how far does nature extend to? Rock and minerals are a part of nature too, everything is...
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    Writing How do I move from a slice-of-life arc to an action arc?

    Well dayum, I read the manga of that and there was a part where it switched to action? Guess I never reached it, must have been somewhat far ahead. Thanks for all the advice... And adding so many shows to my watchlist lmao. Thanks to everyone else to, I think I have an idea of what to do now...
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    Writing How do I move from a slice-of-life arc to an action arc?

    Ah, this is another case of lack of information. I did that in the chapter where the memory wipe happened. Two of the younger ones are also detached because they got isekai'd and view the world as a fantasy book. They don't feel that everyone in the country is real despite them being living...
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    Writing How do I move from a slice-of-life arc to an action arc?

    Humanization in battle... You know, despite my MC being somewhat heartless, I've written a lot of scenes to humanize him and the villains. Never thought of doing it in combat. Perhaps I can add a small sigh when he sees the entire country burning down, or a small portion where he gets reminded...
  13. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing How do I move from a slice-of-life arc to an action arc?

    Oh, if you've read the chapter, it's not stupidity, it's something else entirely. They literally say they don't give a fuck about the lives of everyone in the damn country except their own and their loved ones. They want the dragon to start burning down the countryside so the king can weaken it...
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    Writing How do I move from a slice-of-life arc to an action arc?

    Nah, the MCs know full well that an elder dragon is on their asses but two of them are too arrogant to view it as a threat, two value their life too much and one got his memory wiped by the others because he wanted to do something about it.
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    Writing How do I move from a slice-of-life arc to an action arc?

    Alright so it seems I didn't put much information, the tension has been there since the early chapters. The enemy is already clear, readers just don't know their personality and the extent of their power. There's already been a chapter where the MCs give their thoughts on the grand battle, along...
  16. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing Critique my main protagonists

    From what I understand, Mika and Cairo got isekai'd? That explains why Cairo would be reluctant to hurt people, with earthen morals and all. This academy is very weird with their enrollment though, I mean getting accepted one year earlier is fine, but there has to be a damn good explanation for...
  17. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing How do I move from a slice-of-life arc to an action arc?

    So, there's been a lot of lighthearted scenes in my story lately, but now they have to face the B.B.E.G. Problem is, I'm having trouble changing the 'mood' of the story. I feel like having a battle immediately wouldn't feel right? Anyone have a general idea on how to pull that 'mood change' off...
  18. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Iconic Scenes in your Favourite Story/Webnovel

    Kira's speech at the end of death note.(wait that's an anime). For a webnovel, I don't exactly remember which chapter it is, but in A Will Eternal, the most iconic for me was the scene where
  19. Anon_Y_Mousse

    should I add chapter numbers to my chapter titles?

    Yes, please, I don't read your story but I will still thank you if you do.
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