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  1. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Huh, strange, I didn't get a notification for this reply. Well, it's good to see that my first chapter gets the point across.
  2. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Colored Supremacy

    Damn, where's the NTR then?
  3. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Colored Supremacy

    Damn the build-up, drama, emotional scenes and betrayal, truly this thread is one of the bests anime to exist
  4. Anon_Y_Mousse

    In an Isekai Story, would "Ligma" jokes land or not?

    My mind trembles... jokes aside.. another comparison of a somewhat serious isekai anime would be Grimgar of Fantasy And Ash.
  5. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Your favorite pairings in gender bender

    In a lot of h doujins, just saying. And no, I do not give numbers.
  6. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Colored Supremacy

    Very well, white text supremacy! Wait shit that sounds racist. Only those in the dark side may see this.Join the dark side, we have ice cream, I swear!
  7. Anon_Y_Mousse

    In an Isekai Story, would "Ligma" jokes land or not?

    You didn't read the second part, I said I was fine with puns and shit, you don't have to invent an entire language for a story, just mind the setting. As for why I see it that way, well, it's kinda like seeing the -san -kun honorifics for no reason whatsoever in English web novels, makes me...
  8. Anon_Y_Mousse

    In an Isekai Story, would "Ligma" jokes land or not?

    I never said it can't, you were twisting my words. I was simply saying ligma feels awkward outside of the comedy genre.
  9. Anon_Y_Mousse

    In an Isekai Story, would "Ligma" jokes land or not?

    Cause the literature is published in Japanese, therefore it uses japanese honorifics?
  10. Anon_Y_Mousse

    In an Isekai Story, would "Ligma" jokes land or not?

    Eh well, dunno how a ligma joke would translate into other languages, but ig I can imagine it like how I imagine puns being in a different language.
  11. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing Prompt The most OP, but absurdly crippling power granted to a character?

    Technically they still have to complete whatever goal that was given to them as a result of their power, and they still remember all the emotions that came with their previous life, kinda works as a powerful instinct, especially when the reincarnations span millions of years. Also in my story no...
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    Writing Prompt The most OP, but absurdly crippling power granted to a character?

    This character isn't in my story yet, and I think describing their power wouldn't be too much of a spoiler for any readers in the forum. Let's call it the 'Eternal Ideal'. So basically they're immortal and cannot truly die, no matter what, even if their soul gets poofed from existence it'll come...
  13. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Evil Truck-kun services

    I'll grant this one too, welcome to Skynut, and you're a guy now if you weren't already.
  14. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Evil Truck-kun services

    You know I was actually contemplating on sending you to that one lovecraft cyoa where all the elder gods-outer gods are actually sexy anime girls that the player gets to add to their harem. Evil truck-kun services are not responsible for any spontaneous shifts in reality that may occur during...
  15. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Evil Truck-kun services

    Oh but you do now, and no, you can't since the omniverse was all just a dream of Azathoth. That's why it's the blind idiot god, you would have been find choosing any other outer god lmao. Edit: Now that I think about it, you have blind AND idiot in your title, that's good enough for evil...
  16. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Evil Truck-kun services

    Wish granted, you're awake now azathoth, the omniverse is gone, and now you have to take an eternity-long morning piss.
  17. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Evil Truck-kun services

    Congrats! You've been hit by an Evil Truck-kun, you may now reincarnate into a world of your choosing. Alright, so I don't know if you guys know about the concept of 'evil genie' or not but this game is basically that but Isekai. So you make a 'wish' and write it so that you get transported...
  18. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Posting one chapter first.

    It's best to release enough words for people to get the gist of your story. Like if you have a prologue, better get out at least 1 chapter while your story is in latest series(cause that's when a lot of people will click out of interest). Just make sure the few chapters you release at the start...
  19. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Hmm, you know what I may as well get another source of feedback for my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/320987-reincarnation-of-the-great-conqueror/chapter/321172/
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