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  1. Anon_Y_Mousse

    With the future of a Isekai kingdom in your hand, what would you do?

    1. Take the throne, i'm quite sure they will call a crusade against the demon king on me if I do this. 2. Carolus Rex took the throne at 15 years old and did pretty good, so this is more plausible than you may otherwise think. If he's good as in 'nice guy' that's a definite no no. Good as in...
  2. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Need some help with synopsis

    Thanks, already been working on cutting down the third part, the goal was to establish the MC's personality and the general premise, there are many references here to the cover but I'm not done making it yet. Fourth part needs some whole new lines tbh, it's all over the place. Shouldn't have...
  3. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Need some help with synopsis

    I would have posted this into the 'rate synopsis' thread but I feel like that thread has been dead for a while. Been planning on making a little side project for fun, it's gonna be a little bit of a meta comedy. So here's my synopsis I've edited it now, but I'm still open for improvements
  4. Anon_Y_Mousse

    What the hell is LTnovel.com?

    I feel you man, but you know, at least they did the job properly! The ones who tried to copy my story didn't even do it correctly (no synopsis, old cover, missing chapters) on their shitty website, what an insult!
  5. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Have you ever written an interactive story?

    Yes I have, it was an interactive smut story, though I never got to the smut part. Interactive smut is the only text-based smut I'm interested in reading, but it turns out I'm still not interested in writing. If you know twine 2.0 that's where I tried to make it. There is also the votes, but I...
  6. Anon_Y_Mousse

    On (Re)writing.

    Strangely enough, I never wanted to rewrite my work, not that I'm already satisfied with it, far from it tbh. I guess it's because I don't consider it a "main series" and more of "testing the waters".
  7. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing How to write plotholes?

    Loli-babas are cool too. But they can't replicate the sheer badassery of an old guy who has bulging muscles and a long grey beard. You just feel a sense of security around em y'know.
  8. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing How to write plotholes?

    Aw, but old men are badass and reliable. Not that I have an old man fetish, i swear i don't.
  9. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Write a shonen-style anime script about writing.

    Yeah, feel free to, I mean I literally put my ideas up for all to take in the forum because I don't have time to write all of em.
  10. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing How to write plotholes?

    Nah it's like a meta fic, the MC is a god and my plan is sometimes they pull a literal Deus ex machina and break their world's logic to squeeze an interesting story out of one its people or a break in a character's personality caused by divine guidance, unintentionally of course.
  11. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing How to write plotholes?

    Ikr, why can't we just have a family that treats their son like he had an X year coma or went to prison and help him integrate himself back into society in a wholesome way. Funny thing is, a princess usually has a dagger with her to protect her chastity, given the nature of magical kingdoms, I...
  12. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing How to write plotholes?

    Was it at least the start of some dramatic love story? Heard if you got hit by a car back in the day and survive you enter some romance drama with the one that hit you.
  13. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing How to write plotholes?

    An inconsistency in the flow of logic established by the story, basically. Deus ex machina usually breaks the established logic of a story, so it is ig. Also dude, don't walk and type or truck-kun will assassinate you.
  14. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing How to write plotholes?

    Yes, exactly what it says, I'm asking how to intentionally write plotholes for a sorta satirical novel I'm writing. you can give any genre of example, preferably fantasy though. I know it sounds easy, but I'm actually pretty stumped.
  15. Anon_Y_Mousse

    thoughts on my synopsis for contest story

    First of all, change the last part, a synopsis should answer questions, not ask them imo. Well, actually scratch that, it may work out depending on the tone of your story, but it I feel the questions here are somewhat unecessary. I haven't read your story so I can't really tell you if the...
  16. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Write a shonen-style anime script about writing.

    MC: Oh sounds hella fun. Wait what about the children- IBI(Interdimensional Bereau of Investigation) OPEN UP!!!
  17. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Write a shonen-style anime script about writing.

    You know what, fck it, I'm gonna go for broke! I'm only writing one story rn, so I may as well do a side project, I hope you don't mind me using your idea and twisting it around a little. I've already got the basis of the story down: A recently ascended god who's bored and wants to make a world...
  18. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Do you listen to some musics while writing?

    I get distracted whenever i listen to music with lyrics, so when I want to write I usually listen to some jazz, bosa nova or 18th century music.
  19. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Write a shonen-style anime script about writing.

    Fantasy stories are pretty popular, specially those with god-like OP MCs. So why not make an MC who's a literal god? Like they're omnipotent and are the creator of their own universe, their conflict is building their universe in a way that they get 'tourists'(basically readers) for some god...
  20. Anon_Y_Mousse

    Writing Poem chants, is this a good idea?

    Willow's Longevity - For each soul the caster sacrifices (the souls are gone and can never be revived by any means, even other legendary magics) they add one year to their life, the magic circle takes years of preparation to encompass a small area but the caster can set it up to encompass an...
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