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My parents are atheist, but they're also very traditional/Confucianist. They're not horrible people, but they're judgy and gossipy, and they have a lot of conservative beliefs. Which are very popular in my country, and I mean VERY. Even among the younger generation. On the other hand, I grew up...

I agree with 7ydy. There was a lot of exposition text at the beginning of the chapter, which pulled me out. I would suggest something short, instead of something several paragraphs long. Except for that, I found everythiing good.

Searching through the dictionary for synonyms cuz I want my paragraphs to sound fancy.

I wish I had a proper editor. Instead of just AI.

I think I'll at least attempt to send a message, though I'm unsure if it'll get accepted. Nothing wrong with trying... :)

I've just completed writing my story, when I realize... I've accidently deleted the file. Entirely.

I also know of a no Tell me what this novel is called. I would read the (redacted) out of that. Hm... The premise also kinda reminds me of the Dragon Daddy Diaries. Yes, it's a real light novel. The execution is pretty bad, though. I wonder how it got published.

I'm sorry I was harsh on the review before; I think the pacing issue is cuz of the language barrier. Translating novels absolutely wrecks pacing; if you can, you should get an editor who's good at English. If you still feel it's too difficult, I suggest using the enter key more, and turn long...

1. Maybe it's soft magic, with zero rules. Everything happens only with talent and imagination, and everything is chaos wacko. The more you try to find logic in said magic, the weaker the magic becomes. There's no reason for a magic system to have rules, it's magic. 2. And we can skip the...

I like the idea, but I've read a similar novel before, where the author pulls a gotcha! moment and switches the protagonist after the first chapter. And sadly, in that novel, I had already gotten attached to the very evil and cruel fake protagonist, and I quit the novel after I found out the...

First Impressions: The title sounds like a generic JP light novel, but that's fine, since your story feels like one. Your synopsis sounds more like a story summary than a synopsis. You're supposed to hook in readers with the very first sentence and give us expectations about what your story's...