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It was hot. Very hot. You wasted no time getting right into the smutt, and it was very well written, lmao. The plot also surprisingly made a lot of sense despite this being smutt. The background magic fantasy stuff intrigues me. The only thing that bothered me was the use of some metaphors. I...

Oh, um, wow. Lol. I'd actually planned for the yandere thing to come in later, along with the smutty stuff. Right now, the MC hasn't yet realized he even has a crush, and I'm focusing on that aspect, (which is not easy) so I didn't even consider adding smutt to the beginning of the book. I...

Feeling like I'm about to die after writing two new chapters of my romance novel.

I'm struggling so much with the first chapter of this novel, and I need help. It's a dark BL (Boys Love) novel, so only review if you're into that. No smut or even a kiss yet, but I've got stuff planned. I just want your first impressions of this novel, along with your thoughts on chapter 1...

First impression? I like the title and synopsis. The synopsis is short and to the point, but it kinda fits the style of the 'speedrun' mentioned, so I can tell the narrative tone you're going for. I personally don't like in-game or system novels, but this novel doesn't look too bad. And the...

First impression of the novel? The synopsis sounds generic, and you used too many metaphors, but I still can tell what to expect, so it's not too bad. Then I started reading, and I immediately got put off by Chapter One. Do I really need to know that this protagonist lives next town to his...

I almost couldn't bear to read it because the paragraphs in chapter one weren't properly spaced. Everything just looked like one huge black block. I use PC, so that might affect things. But it got better from chapter two, so I quickly skimmed past chapter one and got to the main story. First...

Same as TheIcMan. I checked the novel out, but I have no idea who the protagonist is at chapter one, Helen, Henry, or whoever the Korean girl is, and I don't see a multiple protagonist tag. Not only that, but I understand zero of the game lingo, so I don't know what's happening, and frankly I...

I'm really excited about seeing a historial drama written with my country (I think) included in the setting, lmao. Giving it a read! First Impressions: The names are really pretty! Are you Asian too, or are you just making stuff up on the fly? Either way, they're really nice. The synopsis...

Same with me! Fantasy is the easiest, because I can make up whatever the hell I want, as long as it stays interesting. And it's even easier if it has dark or horror elements, since then I don't even have to edit when things get confusing; get a scary enough atmosphere, and the confusion will...

If you don't want to say it, you don't have to, but now I'm curious about your novels. Lmao. Also, no. I did not know about any of these details, so thanks for sharing the gossip.^^ Especially the ghost writer one. I'm surprised that's allowed; or did you mean she uses a co-author? Being a...

Worcestershire (Since Yemen was allowed, I'm guessing proper nouns are also allowed.) (Plus, didn't someone already say Yew? At the very beginning of the game, too. Are we allowed to repeat words?)

I've also doubted if it's bots in the past, but then I switched to mobile recently. Changed everything. I feel way too lazy to login and comment with my phone, so I've stopped, and now I realize why some stories have many views but few comments. To be more positive, I actually comment less on...

I didn't know that, that's useful and interesting info. Nobody really talks about stuff like this. From how you know so much, I'm guessing you work in a related field, or maybe as a professional writer? That's really cool! Lmao, but I do feel surprised Rick Riordan skips editors. I would do...

I'll read it! First impressions: The cover put me off for a sec. I thought it was depicting three harem member girls at the front, and the protagonist knight at the back, and I expected something completely different. Thankfully the synopsis and tags clarified that right up, but I think some...

No professional publishing house will allow writing the character's name as a title at a POV switch ... or so you say. --> Points aggressively to Heroes of Olympus by Rick Riordan

Ty. As someone who's never done anything even remotely romantic or questionable before, this is going to be a huge help. (I still question why tf I decided to write this genre. For now, I'm just kinda practicing and trying it out.)

What do you mean by that?

I'm surprised so many authors think their protagonists will end up dead. The swapped protagonist's circumstances will be identical to the original protagonist. That means they'll get all the powers and abilities of the swapped protagonist, no? I can totally imagine my evil Rowan experimenting...