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As long as it's in the Author's Note, you can write it into every single chapter and readers won't mind. Personally, I like to be reminded. I often forget to press the like button.

I think the fact that the response for 'the things you hate the most', are mostly people, says a lot about society. You could say 'pain', 'fear', or even 'mosquitoes', but everyone replies a type of person.

Dilemna? My favorite one is when a character needs to decide between their loved ones (family, lover, etc) and the fate of the entire world. And it's always interesting no matter which they choose. Said character who makes the decision may be a villain, a mentor, or a friend, or even the main...

I agree the writing gets stronger once the characters are on the road. Before that, there's a bunch of paragraphs that only consist of one or two words, and I just don't like the pacing. Ditching the opening, though? Hm... I'm not sure either. If it were me, I would attempt to edit the opening...

I'll put mine up, too. I've had a bad feeling about my story for ages, ESPECIALLY the first chapter, but I just can't tell what or why. Would greatly appreciate it if you just tell me where I went wrong; https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1497625-the-obsessive-male-leads-best-friend/chapter/1497643/

I love comedy, I love exaggerated stuff, and I live for JP light novels, but you still went overboard. It would be fine if the characters were only awkward and naive up to reasonable levels, or if it were anime, a visual medium. Or it would be fine if you committed to the cringe, like 'The...

Listening to Alien Stage! A sweet queer idol series with gorgeous anime art! They look so pretty singing. T^T

I'm atheist, but that makes too much sense not to be true.

Slim does not equate fit and healthy. My grandfather, for example, was very slim. He was also confined to a hospital bed all the time, unable to walk, and had a very bad case of diabetes that eventually killed him. You want to be slim from exercise, not slim from stress. Sadly.

I would do unmentionable things to any of them. Oh, and Shaman's abs also feel a bit high up on his chest.

Am I the only one giggling at 'good narrative?' That sounds exactly what a writer would say.

Fit... and healthy... What is that? Screams in lethargic dread

Are you all English majors? How could you inscribe Such beautiful prose, keeping me in line. For I cannot write. Watch me fail, don't laugh! As I write word by word sadness with no rhyme.