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Edited the post, cuz nobody understands this is a 'chain.' Answer the question of the comment above you, and ask a random question about your novel. Then the next person will answer, and ask a new question about their novel, and so on. The answers don't need to be correct. Adding an extra rule...

Too many times than I can count. Usually for any of these three reasons: 1. A weak protagonist who only wallows in their emotions instead of taking action, who repeats the same mistakes over and over again. 2. A selfish protagonist who acts like a thoughtless hypocrite and judges everyone...

I'm from South Korea! :) Hello, and nice to meet you! And Cory was from Hungary? That explains why I'm so hungary (cough, oops, dad joke) over their novels. I'm surprised at the large number of Asians and the low number of people from English speaking countries. I expected more Americans...

I'm surprised there's so many fellow green lovers. I thought people all preferred blue, pink, and the greyscale monochromatics. But teal, pastel green, and olive green are soooo pretty. I'm glad there's so many of us. :)

Why are some writers obsessed with percentages and numbers in their novels? They sound fake. Especially when talking about genetics. I'm a biology major, and this irritates the heck outta me.

Am I supposed give you a link and ask for a review, or am I supposed to review something here?

Would you be friends with benefits with your work colleague? It depends on the situation, really, but I don't think so. It's unnecessary, and may complicate things. Would you treat your adopted child like your real child? If I don't, it'll seem suspicious. So yes. I will. For the duration of...

No better way to put it myself. And not only is it edgy, it's boring. I love funny and fast paced edgy, but I cannot read bland and generic edgy. Especially if it's full of purple prose and descriptions that don't actually make sense.

This reminds me of Zerg fiction; a setting in a world where males are extremely rare. Anyway, I'll add that I found something interesting too; many animal species with birth rates that are highly skewed towards females can give birth asexually and sexually. That's why the rates are skewed- all...

I'm more concerned about the protagonist and plot. Which was So your idea is a story is about this, not about butterflies. But since your novel's title is 'The Plague of Butterflies', how are they important in your story? By story, I don't mean the background setting, but the protagonist and...

Just change one or two letters from what you have currently. I'm not good with names either. If you want better opinions, you can also make a new post in 'Author General' for ideas.

As you've said, novels with weirdly skewed gender ratios are just porn with plot. So naturally they don't make sense, and nobody cares. The authors know it's a trashy setting too. In fact, the reverse gender role trope in itself is actually often considered a trashy setting, and is avoided by...

It's not a style of writing I'm familiar with, so don't take my review too seriously, lol. Your story is good. Lustitia, a name, isn't capitalized, and that irritates me. Please capitalize it. And now to answer your questions: A very descriptive dark fiction with lots of war, blood, and mature...

You too? Me three; the synopsis feels like the summary of a whole nother book. Nobody is going to be reading that.

It's not the type of story I personally like, so I dunno what to say. I'll leave someone else to review in more detail, all I'll add is that your beginning drags on a bit, so you'll want to tighten that. And this is a just a minor detail, but Arcadia? Avalon? Wolfheart? I've heard all these...

I should have mentioned it's BL beforehand, I'm sorry! T^T But ty soooo much for the advice. It was really helpful. All of it, from all three of you, but especially what you guys pointed out about the dialogue, the scenes dragging, and the characters being too soft and female coded. I didn't...