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Hmm... I just realized my writing style tends to be atmospheric, simbolic and emotional. That's why I find it difficult to write comedy scenes that are purely entertaining. :blob_melt:

The answer is encrypted in the following narrative: :blob_melt: Rose petals swayed gently in the valley breeze. They drifted through the air and brushed against the white curtains covering the bedroom window. “La la la lala…” A small, sweet voice echoed inside the warm room. A little girl in...

I was just giving you casual feedback. I didn't expect you to immediately change your synopsis and title. Hats off to you.👒:blob_salute:

Tftc

Sis... you're not suggesting OP change his story into smut, genben, futa, and other audience-favorite genres, are you?:blob_aww:

Your engagement is on the right track. Look! Out of an average of 3 views, there are at least 2 favorites. It means that out of 3 clicks, 2 members like your story. Your story is entertaining for readers. If you're wondering why there haven't been any or very few comments, it's purely because...

At least you haven't encountered a troll yet. I've encountered 1 star troll twice in RR. :blob_melt:

Build a platonic relationship: one based on support, trust, and affection without possessiveness. My second FMC also has a platonic relationship with my first FMC's younger brother who is willing to do anything to keep my second FMC alive, even if it means being hated by my second FMC.

The synopsis is more like a plot summary, without any emotional appeal to potential readers. Please transform your synopsis into the emotional experience promised in your story. You can use the following synopsis formula (typically used in commercial novels): So, your synopsis will serve as a...

I have four of my five fiction works on hiatus. I was so enthusiastic at the beginning that I didn't realize my limitations. I also didn't focus much on engagement. Now I'm more focused on improving the quality of my narrative (repeated editing). One work already consumes a lot of resources...