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To anyone who claims to be asking for honest feedback, please be honest with yourself. Don't say you're asking for feedback if you don't even appreciate the reviewer's time and thought for your work. Reviewers are human beings, too, and ignoring them as if they don't exist will only hurt them.

You're not a teen writer, dude. :blob_melt: Well, I've read a few of your chapters and I've noticed some issues. But I'm still in a bad mood. I'll write feedback once I'm in a better mood. Sorry for my complaints.:blob_teary:

Dude... are you sure you want honest, blunt, and perhaps even brutal feedback? I don't want to compare you to other writers. But look at people who ask feedback requests (especially new authors in teens) often don't even want to respond to my honest feedback because they're purely seeking...

Dude... your fiction has been validated by the market, look! There's already one reviewer commenting and praising your work, even though it's only just been released. There's a saying: if the customer likes it, let it be. If you ask for our validation, you'll only get author validation. If you...

Please read my feedback. I've provided a detailed review. Please appreciate those who pay attention to your fiction. :blob_melt:

Summon @CharlesEBrown

After reading 2.5 chapters, I’ll be honest, dude. Your chapters have big ambition, but the execution still has weaknesses in narrative structure. Well, let’s talk about the strengths of your narrative: First, your chapters are quite immersive. The narrative uses fairly rich sensory details...

I'm thankful you're not @Macha ... she never threatened to take away my immortality by pulling out my intestines. :blob_melt:

Wow.. this feedback is similar to my previous one. One reviewer's response may be biased... but if other reviewers confirm similar issues, then the assessment becomes quite valid. In short, @Kazehiro you need to refine and simplify your prose, avoiding over-description and melodrama.:blob_melt:

The chapters are short, but the narrative clutter is too much. What casual reader would want to read two chapters just to watch MC stand in the rain? :blob_pout:

You read 10 chapters for this kind of narrative?! Too crazy! :blob_pout:

As you requested, I'll be honest, too honest, too blunt. I'm giving you feedback as you requested. Are you upset with my initial statement? Well, I was just demonstrating your narrative. I've read three chapters and stopped there because your narrative is melodramatic. What is melodrama? It's...

The synopsis is too confusing for the reader. Change the synopsis to make it more salesy. You can use the following synopsis formula (typically used in commercial novels): I've explained this formula too many times. The point is to transform your synopsis from a plot summary into the...

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Here are some practical tips for writing action scenes (especially battles): First, describe the chaotic environment as the atmosphere at the beginning of the narrative. You can describe dust, blood, corpses, sunlight, or any object to depict the tension of the battle. The goal is to draw the...