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Quick feedback after reading the prologue: Your writing isn't bad, and the flow is quite fluid. However, the narrative structure has the following narrative flaws: First, why did you include an info dump of the MC's background after he transmigrated? The above narration is an...

My advice... build your own branding. Write an authentic story that represents who you are. Riding a trend is tempting and a quick way to become popular, but it's also a quick way to be forgotten. You know... LOTR didn't become popular overnight, it took years to become known and almost a...

Try to write a short story before writing a series! https://www.scribblehubforum.com/threads/when-should-you-create-short-stories-the-five-problems-short-stories-solve.27865/

Congrats! I'm happy. I hope you're not a racist. :blob_melt:

Congrats... dude :blob_melt:

Is this a coincidence? I read two fictions in the feedback section... and found a weakness in the narrative structure related to characterization. Some characters were difficult to distinguish without name tags. They lacked identity, personality, and unique voices. They were more like plot...

Dude... I'll be honest about my reading experience after reading your prologue. My brief impression is that I had a hard time distinguishing your main characters. Jakes and Casimir's voices are too similar... and strangely, I found it easier to recognize the Good Doctor (who is actually...

The engagement is too crazy. The gap between views and bookmarks is too lopsided. Perhaps more views are generated by bots than organic (human) readers click.

Where is link of the story? :blob_melt:

Your thread is drowning. I'm raising it to give it visibility. :blob_melt:

Are you planning to kill her @AliceMoonvale ? Your name is too brutal. :blob_melt:

Okay. It's my honest impression after reading your chapter. Dude... what's the point of that description in the plot? This static description slows down pacing (time freezes in the story world). Insert descriptions of the character's appearance in action to speed up pacing. Dude... do you...