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  1. Eldoria

    Yes, you're right. After all, I just write for fun. :blob_cookie:

    Yes, you're right. After all, I just write for fun. :blob_cookie:
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    As a compromise, I'm rewriting and continuing to release the latest chapters at a slower pace...

    As a compromise, I'm rewriting and continuing to release the latest chapters at a slower pace. Besides... I already have an ending in my mind. So, the story needs to be finished, or at least divided into volumes. :blob_melt:
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  3. Eldoria

    I know how you feel... I want to keep refining, editing, rewriting, and perfecting the...

    I know how you feel... I want to keep refining, editing, rewriting, and perfecting the narrative. I've already written my first chapters several times. But a member here once complained about the endless cycle of rewriting.
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    It's a very popular story. Even without the rewrite... I don't think readers would complain.

    It's a very popular story. Even without the rewrite... I don't think readers would complain.
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    Your chapters were deleted, but now they are reuploaded. What happened? :blob_cookie:

    Your chapters were deleted, but now they are reuploaded. What happened? :blob_cookie:
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  6. Eldoria

    Sleep schedule.

    I'm pretty sure... almost everyone wants this: to go to bed when you're sleepy; to wake up refreshed. BUT the world often doesn't allow it. :blob_pout:
  7. Eldoria

    Could you give me a review?

    Since Zinless is busy, I'll ask him @Tempokai to move your thread to the feedback section. Sorry to bother you, dude. :blob_melt:
  8. Eldoria

    @Anemic_Vampire is a kind vampire girl... she never threatened to disembowel me. :blob_pout:

    @Anemic_Vampire is a kind vampire girl... she never threatened to disembowel me. :blob_pout:
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  9. Eldoria

    It was just a joke yesterday, sis. Don't take it seriously. :blob_aww:

    It was just a joke yesterday, sis. Don't take it seriously. :blob_aww:
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    Just to clarify... I'm not your alt. You hear it... @Louhi :blob_melt:

    Just to clarify... I'm not your alt. You hear it... @Louhi :blob_melt:
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    It's sunday. It's time for a bath. :blob_melt:

    It's sunday. It's time for a bath. :blob_melt:
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  12. Eldoria

    Need help with action scenes.

    Both, dude. I don't want you to feel guilty just for asking for feedback. :blob_pout:
  13. Eldoria

    Need help with action scenes.

    Simply reading an action scene doesn't equate to being able to write one. There's a fundamental difference between reading and writing fiction. So, is it possible to imitate the action writing style of another novel? Perhaps, but only if the writer possesses the narrative analysis skills to...
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    Need help with action scenes.

    Let the moderator move it. Members don't have the authority to delete threads.
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    Need help with action scenes.

    This thread is in the wrong place; it should be in the feedback section. @Zinless you have a new patient. Sorry to bother you again and again. :blob_melt:
  16. Eldoria

    Feedback on my Story

    Please read this thread: https://www.scribblehubforum.com/threads/how-to-tell-a-scammer-from-an-actual-human.27427/#post-628854
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    Has anyone else learned to spot AI stories?

    Instead of guessing from a vacuum, do a coherence test. Ask the authors why they used this word, sentence, or paragraph in their narrative? What is their function in the narrative? Every word, sentence, or paragraph should have a narrative purpose in a scene. If the authors can't answer...
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    Feedback on my Story

    Hello, is anyone there? :blob_melt: Here are my honest impressions as a reader (chapter 1): Nice, opening the scene with mystery from the first POV. But I was disappointed in the next sentence because you immediately revealed the MC's current location (in the forest). You already know...
  19. Eldoria

    Witch vs Knightess: Which do you prefer?

    Witch vs Knightess: Which do you prefer? My answer is very subjective, I prefer witches because I am an immortal magical girl. :blob_melt:
  20. Eldoria

    If I were to write a joke, it would be a dark comedy. Lol:blob_pout:

    If I were to write a joke, it would be a dark comedy. Lol:blob_pout:
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