Competitive straightforward biased blunt reviewer here

[Bimbanana]

oh shit, you're here.

What'd you said just now?

The beginning chaps.
@Bimbanana

I would say, your story is great, for all the right reasons. Not the prose, not the grammar, but the characters, the dialogues, and the overall plot is a form of comedy people could read and laugh at. It's great for its purpose, and I appreciated that you focus solely on making the dialogues funny but natural. Highly recommended. 7.9/10.
Reminder that I have not read the entirety of the story, just the first chapter and I can already see how the plot's gonna go.

Thanks dude!
This boost me better than caffeine!

 

[Nolff]

Better not forget me.

What was your story, again? I actually forgot. Oh no.

Is my story good as a plot

Ducks are goats, my husky salutes them when he sees them

Absolutely ambiguous. No, like, you only gave me a glimpse of your chaps to work on. What can I do with it, fumble it till it weavers into destinies?

 

[AliceMoonvale]

What was your story, again? I actually forgot. Oh no.

Absolutely ambiguous. No, like, you only gave me a glimpse of your chaps to work on. What can I do with it, fumble it till it weavers into destinies?

the pink one in my signature

 

[Nolff]

the pink one in my signature

Ah yeah. Putting that on the list. Moving on...

 

[c37]

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2170801/bstard-of-abaddon/ Please review my novel. I would appreciate it if you could review all five chapters ?, but it’s fine if you can’t.

 

[Nolff]

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2170801/bstard-of-abaddon/ Please review my novel. I would appreciate it if you could review all five chapters ?, but it’s fine if you can’t.

Oh, you're the guy who followed me recently, huh?

I wonder why you followed me. Well, sure, I'll bite.

 

[c37]

Oh, you're the guy who followed me recently, huh?

I wonder why you followed me. Well, sure, I'll bite.

Actually, I confused you with Laiel, but I like your style of critiquing. Harsh criticism focused strictly on the content resonates with me.

 

[LastMinami]

Yeah so, just drop whatever you want, I'll bite.

Gonna rate it from 1 to 10. Discretion advised.

I'll be blunt with whatever I'll say, and it's biased. Even if I somehow helped, do not rely on my feedbacks.

Alr, let the hell let loose.

Oh great lord, conqueror, he who dines each night with the child of the shining, please read this novel today, if possible at least the introduction. I'll leave you the link because I don't know how to paste it haha

Survival is My Only Power

Michael Vekoc wasn't the chosen one. He was the abandoned one. Beaten in alleyways for a few coins. Betrayed by his own family. Forgotten by a world that didn't want to see him. Until Xix found him. Not a powerful god of war or wisdom. But a newborn deity, without...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[Jaymi]

I haven't cried in a while. Bring it on.

This Wonderful World We Woke Up In!

My senpai has a hero complex. When the bathroom mirror turned into a portal leading to another world, he grabbed my hand and jumped in. I didn’t exactly get a say in it. Now we’re heroes tasked with defeating the Demon King. Senpai thinks this place is wonderful....

www.scribblehub.com

 

[Conqueror_Quack]

I haven't cried in a while. Bring it on.

People can't see your signature on mobile, paste the link

 

[Jaymi]

People can't see your signature on mobile, paste the link

Thanks for letting me know!

 

[Nolff]

I haven't cried in a while. Bring it on.

This Wonderful World We Woke Up In!

My senpai has a hero complex. When the bathroom mirror turned into a portal leading to another world, he grabbed my hand and jumped in. I didn’t exactly get a say in it. Now we’re heroes tasked with defeating the Demon King. Senpai thinks this place is wonderful....

www.scribblehub.com

Alr, piling it up to the list. Just wait for me to butcher it.

People can't see your signature on mobile, paste the link

Why are you here?

 

[Playerkartik]

Shattered Skies: The Beginnings

Every ten years, the skies crack. Clouds turn to glass, and shards rain down—fragments of memory from lives long gone. These shards can awaken power… or corrupt the soul. Kian, a boy with fire in his heart, receives a shard unlike any other. As memories ignite within him, his...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[Nolff]

Shattered Skies: The Beginnings

Every ten years, the skies crack. Clouds turn to glass, and shards rain down—fragments of memory from lives long gone. These shards can awaken power… or corrupt the soul. Kian, a boy with fire in his heart, receives a shard unlike any other. As memories ignite within him, his...

www.scribblehub.com

I really wish the MC's not a copy of corniness of you.

 

[Playerkartik]

I really wish the MC's not a copy of corniness of you.

HE's better than both of us

 

[Conqueror_Quack]

Why are you here?

Someone promised me they will unleash it on the anime guy or something, I'm waiting

 

[Fairemont]

The Secret Lives of Magical Girls

Under constant threat by malevolent forces bleeding through the fabric of reality, the world must turn to divine guardians chosen by the heavens: magical girls. These young women rise to the occasion and fend off the vile monsters seeking to corrupt and consume all of humanity, but there is...

www.scribblehub.com

I need to make sure that my writing can live up to the amazing cover Pangmida made for me.

 

[Nolff]

Someone promised me they will unleash it on the anime guy or something, I'm waiting

He already admitted defeat. Though, you can wait here and prepare some popcorn. I'm currently reading through this corny ass boy's story for the purpose of telling him that I am different from his MC.

The Secret Lives of Magical Girls

Under constant threat by malevolent forces bleeding through the fabric of reality, the world must turn to divine guardians chosen by the heavens: magical girls. These young women rise to the occasion and fend off the vile monsters seeking to corrupt and consume all of humanity, but there is...

www.scribblehub.com

I need to make sure that my writing can live up to the amazing cover Pangmida made for me.

Sorry, this is butchering thread. Lmao.

 

[Fairemont]

He already admitted defeat. Though, you can wait here and prepare some popcorn. I'm currently reading through this corny ass boy's story for the purpose of telling him that I am different from his MC.

Sorry, this is butchering thread. Lmao.

And?

Chop, Chop!

 

[AliceMoonvale]

Me waiting and watching like: