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Villainess + reincarnation/time loop trope combination is still quite popular especially among girls, and so, many readers will flock to your story from that alone. But, the premise is cliched aside being slightly dark (dying 9 times in a row and mc turning into a villain are still ordinary)...

Hmm, an underdog story, eh? Although the premise isn't bad, I still find it too plain and kind of generic. There are so many stories that include similar theme like yours, especially the tournament trope. The mc's motivation and goal are also a bit problematic. I think following the story from...

Sure, but only if you care about numbers. Better but kinda flat tonally. Maybe because you didn't vary the sentences' length, though that's just a minor problem, so you don't have to fix it.

I've read similar premise in a japanese novel called Saikyou no Shuzoku ga Ningen Datta Ken. To answer your question, you're doing pretty well. If your synopsis more centered around escapism and promise of harems, you'd get even more readers but that's up to you.

Make it simple and easy to digest but also conveying the premise with clarity. Something like this.

It seems interesting, but unfortunately, your synopsis turn people away. Isekai fans are generally liking toward personal growth rather than overarching conflicts or conspiracies, so you should change it imo. Not to mention, isekai parodies are kinda stale since we already have Konosuba and...

Basically, the premise is about music, right? Well, webnovel ain't the right medium for that, so I doubt the story will work. Yes, you should and make sure to be consistent.

The premise is kinda interesting but old and too niche, especially for webnovel readers. In addition, the mc seems like a prick judging from the synopsis. Personally, I doubt the story will find success, so you'll get less than 100 readers with very low chance of becoming popular.

Your story reminds me of Warhammer40k and has great world building and setting. Unfortunately, webnovel readers don't care about that. They prefer character-centric stories rather than setting-centric ones, so you'll get less than 100 readers in 30 chapters with very low chance of getting...

While it's easy to understand what's your story about, I find it not really appealing. There's nothing special about a pacifist protagonist, though it could work as a comedy. But then again, I doubt it will catch readers with just that. You'll get around 100 readers in 30 chapters with very low...

Switching between alternate world and reality a.k.a traditional portal fantasy is an outdated trope, unfortunately. The premise is too basic, even with a psychic main character since it's not fresh enough. In addition, the story's half of first chapter is basically a summary of mc's personality...

Most common ones are from superhero genre i.e., Batman, Ironman, Punisher, Black Panther, etc. They're technically powerless amid people with abilities. For more of weak and normal characters, you can read more examples here. Not common in scribblehub, though, because the readers here prefer op...

I meant it has explicit sexual content. The experiments seem to make the story qualified as a smut. Wait, I didn't expect you to ask for feedback instead of leaving a comment like half of users in this thread. I should've clarified that. Guess I'll put my feedback inside a spoiler for this one.

Oh hey, I was kind of hoping for you to visit my thread lol. Glad to see you here. Anyway, back to giving feedback. Your premise reminds me of those crime-solving tv shows without the smut part. While it seems great at first glance, the premise isn't made for webnovels, I think. Both crime and...

Immortal protagonist is not really interesting nowadays, so it will be hard to gain readers with just that trope alone. You didn't insert any twist in your premise either. I think you will gain less than 100 readers at chapter 30 with very low chance of becoming popular. Mostly the latter. I...

Good twist on a popular premise; however, that alone isn't enough. It's still rather plain imo. You'll have decent amount of readers, but low chance to become popular.

You know, I hate to argue on the internet just because I find it pointless, so this will be my last reply to you to clarify things. What I meant by generic and cliche is that they don't bring something new to the table. Every successful story has at least their own twist of the popular tropes...

I don't see how I contradict myself here? Even if the story has every popular stuff in it but very cliche and generic, it won't be successful at all. On the other hand, if the story has only one popular thing but the premise is unique and easy to digest, it'll have a high chance to become...

It's mostly a no from me. My answer for your story is similar to Agentt's. Although the premise is unique and clear, magical girls trope isn't popular anymore. Your only hope for readers is from girls' love. I'd estimate you'll get 200-300 readers at best, maybe more if you add gender-bender...

I honestly don't know. Because the premise is too flawed to begin with, I don't think you'll find success anywhere with that story. I will be more than glad to be proven wrong, though.