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Well, those genres you mentioned are technically real novels too. They're just very appealing to webnovel readers. Maybe if people wanted to read trad fantasy, they could just browse kindle or go to bookstore. So, you've decided to cling onto your value. I get that. Just don't blame the...

About your title, in my opinion, it should describe the essence or a word/phrase that is unique to the story. Something like: Life as a Merfolk Skinner turned Hero Legend of Merfolk Farmer Ripping off Merfolk's scales for living until they caught me red-handed! Now I must become their hero...

Here's my analysis: Your title isn't that interesting, unfortunately. Doesn't have to be eye-catching, but... Your synopsis suffers the same problem. It is a proper one for sure, but it screams your average hero's journey stories which aren't popular here. Telling your world's history right off...

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Please edit mine. My story doesn't have smut.

Just make the stats meaningful and affect their life. One of my main pet peeves in litrpg is the stats are just number decoration that don't matter since the mc will win anyway despite the vast number difference with their enemies. Also, try to have less RNG based skills because it's really...

Uranus is so big that around 23 earths can fit in it

Here, I'll give you some hints: It's not the cover nor the tags that made it so popular. While blurb is important, it's not the main cause.

Wkwkwkland, a.k.a Indonesia :blob_salute:

To become famous like J.K Rowling, Stephen King, etc. - - - Ok, that goal is a little bit too unrealistic. I'm just fed up with my country's novels, over-saturated with romance and horror but almost no fantasy. I kinda want to change that. Also, drawing comic is pain in the butt and takes very...

Drinking powdered milk back when I was in high school. I didn't realize that I was allergic to it, yet I kept drinking it anyway.

One of the strongest existence in my story is... an ant. Yes, your usual, tiny little ant. Nuff said.

Yeah, that's because they're popular here, next to smut. I guess writing stories with popular genres is also a viable way to get comments.

Ironically for you, people often comment more when the story hits trending, at least based on my observation and experience. One of the easier ways to get feedback is directly asking them, either by writing it at the end of a chapter or posting a non-chapter specifically for feedback. The latter...

Thank you so much for the very thoughtful feedback! I agree with everything you've just written and I'll fix those problems in some time. Though I wonder what makes the mc strikes you as a drunkard? Because I didn't actually intend him to be one lol. Also, If I may ask, which sentence was it?

Can I also get a feedback? My story is rather old but I wanna know your opinion regardless. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2738/the-magic-lumberjack/

I can give you some feedback.

Their eyes a bit too far apart, imo. Just saying.

I think the story has potential, but the pace is too slow. I'm halfway chapter 5 yet there's still no action or mecha in sight, so it's kinda boring. And despite the story takes place in hell, the setting feels too... ordinary. Like if you change the setting into human world instead, the story...