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Sorry, but I must say no. The premise is too basic and the genre isn't appealing for Scribblehub audience... or webnovel readers in general. Maybe it could work as a short story in some literary magazine, but... yeah, I can't see this becoming popular at all on here. Interesting but bad premise...

If you care about numbers going up, then you should to save yourself from getting depressed due to not receiving enough attention (this is my true intention for creating this thread btw). If not, then you shouldn't and focus on honing your writing skill instead. It's totally up to you.

I've read yours before actually, and it's a yes... with a big if. Your story has clear and (kinda) fresh premise coupled with smut and good comedy. But, there's only one thing holding your story back -- it's the grammar. If that problem is gone, you'll get lots of readers within a week! I'm...

Isekai, survival, ecchi, and especially the incest tag, your story looks very promising on the paper. However, your creative decisions hinder its potential. Let me list some of them: The title. It's not interesting enough because people won't expect it as an isekai or even incest story. The...

Well, I won't focus on technical aspect too much because there's already someone who's excel on that area, but I'll give my feedback regardless. You should improve your description since you're relying too much on adjectives. Also, try to reduce your 'I's count in your writing; here's what I...

I've read your prologue and I got little confused. For an ancient entity, he comes across like a young adult to me lol. Maybe you should've used 3rd pov imo... or if it was intentional, you should inform the audience that he's actually young or whatever. That being said, it won't affect my...

Eh, the premise is really niche imo even with the popular isekai setting. I think your intended audiences aren't even here because they either had already moved on from their hobby or they just prefer watching anime instead of reading webnovels. At least you got girls love in there, so it won't...

Give me your story's link and I will give you my feedback and prediction per title above. By popular, I mean reaching 800+ readers on this site (or other places too, if you want) and/or getting into trending. However, don't expect any very detailed opinion because I'm not really much of a critic...

Street food from Indonesia (where Bali is located), more precisely from my city. It's basically prawn crackers covered with spicy sauce. All kinds of toppings can be added like chicken feet, noodles, eggs, macaronis, and/or many more. Very recommended.

Can anyone please give feedback on my synopsis? Which one is better?

This is false imo The secret formula is actually (for scribblehub) Girls Love and Gender Bender currently, though those 3 genres are still relevant but not as popular as they used to be. Also, sorry to hear that.

Me too. The first time I read it when it still had like 50 chapters on the translator's website.

Just like learning any skill, you should start with the basics first, for example: drawing lines and shapes. Then, you move on to more advanced techniques such as sketching and shading. Keep going until you've mastered all the cores. You don't need expensive equipment to learn all of those...

The thing is, webnovel readers tend to 'judge by the book cover', except the cover is the premise. If they don't know much about what your story about, they won't read it. So, you might have to spoil them a little.

Not sure if associating editor with slave is a good idea, but anyway, good luck.

Maybe Tony had finally fed up with people complaining about biased trending algorithm :blob_hmm_two:

Make the scene slow paced but not repetitive. Show don't tell rule is million times more important here. Btw I'm also still learning to write this kind of stuff, so take my advice with a grain of salt.

Light novel titles are just more extreme examples to illustrate my point. I also meant using my idea for your synopsis too. By the way, Jemini said it better than me, so you should read her post.

If you followed my suggestions back then, this probably wouldn't happen. Just saying~

Warlock of the Magus World, one of the first cn webnovels I've read. Great mc overall. He's closer to a villain rather than a hero yet he still has redeeming qualities. Very satisfying when he powers up because he gets them through schemes and wits, not just luck. Watching the stats jump from...