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I find the satire to be inaccurate because what's actually happening is the opposite. People tend to believe everything and the media loves hyping up bad news (even misleading the viewers with their opinions). Remember 2012? Y2K bug? Those were constantly discussed in every media during that...

Of course! Especially if you promise that, how could I say no? But... now I feel bad for my feedback of your story. The cover, the premise, and the narrative voice are great; as for the rest, not so much. The title is unclear. The synopsis is unnecessarily complicated. The first chapter...

I have mixed feelings about your story. The prose, grammar, and the pacing are great. On the other hand, the dialogues are not engaging -- it's like they're pretending to be interesting by creating drama between the characters, but the problems are so mundane and shallow that they only make me...

Okay premise, but not enough become popular. The synopsis needs some work. I like how the first chapter begin because you skip the boring part and jump straight into the conflict without confusing me as a reader. Less than 100 readers by Chapter 30. Usually military novels especially based in...

I tried not to care at all since it doesn't concern me, who currently lives in a 3rd world country far from europe, but every social media keeps pushing down constant propaganda into my throat -- I couldn't help but to form my own opinion of the topic. I just support whoever the least hypocrite...

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The premise seems a bit... bland as in there's nothing special about the story, judging from your synopsis. The title could be improved and the first chapter is okay. Less than 100 readers by Chapter 30. To be frank, I never really a fan of amnesiac protagonist, but I'll cast my bias aside...

Soul swapping isn't really a thing in ScribbleHub, but that doesn't mean all hope is lost. Decent premise; only the title is holding it back because it's vague. Good first chapter. Less than 150 readers by Chapter 30.

Sorry for the delay again. This time, I caught a fever, so I couldn't review anything. The premise is decent but not amazing. The first chapter could be better without the exposition prologue. I know you wanted to show some context, but I'd prefer it after you introduce the mc... or make it...

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Reincarnated as monster is one of most trending tropes ever, but the premise is a bit too plain for ScribbleHub since reborn as dragon isn't new anymore. Everything else is fine, though. 200-500 readers by Chapter 30

It's a flawed but otherwise fun story. Although I like the 4th wall breaks, I find the interview section annoying since it's basically an infodump. The title and cover could be better. I've read Chapter 19; it's pretty good. The prose is much better compared to the first chapter (not saying...

Guess I'll just review both. Journey to Become a Great Spirit: As you said, it's a very standard fantasy story. I honestly don't know what to write about it. Everything's fine, I think? My only critique for you is that you should try to use less I's in your writing. 150-300 readers by Chapter...

Sorry, I genuinely didn't see your post (either my browser didn't load it or it's my brain's fault). I hope you don't mind the late feedback. Nothing new with the premise but still good enough, plus you can't go wrong with Gender Bender and Girls Love. The prose is good and paced nicely. All in...

I assume you meant Twin Flames? Because that's the only story that has below 30 chapters. The rewrite doesn't have first chapter yet, so I'll focus on the old one instead. If that's the case, I think your story has potential... if the first chapter was easier to comprehend. I suppose you...

The emphasis on the rarely seen culture (Indian) is nice, but that alone isn't enough to gain readers. The premise seems to be basic based on your synopsis. It also doesn't have what most BL readers want: romance. That brings us to the lack of Male Lead mentions which any typical BL story would...

I'm back from my long hiatus. I'll continue giving predictions now. Too many stories that I need to go through, so I'll just review the ones that are still active. While Villainess genre is one of the trending genres in SH, yours is rather too plain to reach popular. Evil protagonists are quite...

Should I resurrect my prediction thread? Idk if people still want it though

Not really fine but slowly getting better. Because apparently I have untreated ADHD which have caused many problems in my life for the past several months (or years in total). After discovering my mental disorder, now I'm content with myself and more motivated. Thanks for asking.