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The premise seems rather bland at a first glance because the synopsis is too vague. What does she look like after she stopped being a human? What are her goals? What powers she will gain? You should tell the answers from the start because right now the story doesn't look like it has a hook to...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2738/the-magic-lumberjack/ Thanks in advance

Okay, I already know it's gonna have many readers before I even clicked the link. Simple yet very original and attention-grabbing premise that for some reason nobody has thought about it afaik. Good prose for a new and non-native author too, much better than mine when I was started lol. 300-700...

(WIP) Mika Misono from Blue Archive Holy shit this character is so hard to draw. Anyway, back to predicting stories and writing I go (after I got rest)~

Lol I guess you could say that except I don't use cards, crystal balls, or whatever. I think transmigration stories are still popular, but yours seems to be very plain. Without any twist, the premise is already too ordinary for most SH readers. The first chapter is fine. Less than 100 readers...

No problem. By the way, I recommend for you to read this and try to learn from it if you want to write more smut of that genre.

Well, since nobody wanted to volunteer, I decided to read your chapter and give you my feedback. I think you were too focusing on the actions when instead you should focus on the characters' emotions and feelings. It also doesn't seem like a shotacon smut tbh. Take a grain of salt with my...

Sociopaths and narcissists. Also weebs.

Emilia is done. Back to writing I guess.

Emilia-tan WIP

Link Well, it's not "bad" in a ridiculous way, maybe. I just tried way too hard.

I wrote a smut chapter, hoping to get some views from it. It ended up very badly and became my worst and most embarrassing chapter ever written.

Go on hiatus once or twice. They can't pirate your story if you don't update it.

I meant the part where getting isekai'ed due to the goddess's summon. Maybe overdone isn't the right word, just have been done many times.

Well, you got me curious with that title. Even though the premise (arguably) is overdone, the story is promising just because of the MC's unusual ability. Most importantly, it reeks of overpoweredness which is great for readership. The first couple of chapters are interesting and I like how...

While this is generally true, I think the premise has a chance to become popular if the MC was a regressed pro gamer that returned back to when the game was still new. Just use the game you're most familiar with and change the name if you're planning to monetize your work.

At first glance, the story seems like a generic isekai until I read the first chapter. The narration is unique for sure, but I personally don't think it'll work with the premise. This kind of narrative voice is better suited for multiple protagonists, but that doesn't mean you should stop doing...

Dark, edgy, or black, I love them all. They never fail to make me laugh no matter time and place. And the more taboo the topic, the better the jokes. Dark humor is like children with leukemia; they never get old.

Sorry, but the story seems to have nothing new to offer. Reincarnating more than once has been done many times before -- at least you can add more twists to the gimmick. The premise is also cliched. The first chapter, however, is alright. Lastly, fix the title because otherwise you'll lost...