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    Pay me to give you your ideas

    I want a free sample
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    What is the biggest mistake a new writer can make?

    Not starting at the action. So many stories start with a prologue before the Isekai or whatever. Don’t, if you’ve got a cool idea in mind just get to it already. You don’t have to spend 30 chapters justifying it.
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    What's the point?

    The fact I can read this disqualifies you from being the worst writer on this site, let alone the planet.
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    MC is kicked from the party FOR ACTUAL GOOD REASONS!!!

    The whole thing is kind of an abstracted "The cool kids hated me for no reason, but I'll show them all!" Having an actual reason to have been kicked out would ruin the fantasy of it.
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    F%@~ing Tournament arcs!

    The plan is you have one round, then travel to the next place to do the next round while all the plot continues. Gives time for planning, learning new skills and all that.
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    F%@~ing Tournament arcs!

    I'm due for one but I'm going to break it up so each "Round" takes place in a different arena, so there are gaps between each one for other plot. Maybe it'll work out, maybe it'll be an even worse disaster we'll see.
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    How would society react to this dystopian prison?

    This is just solitary confinement. Prolonged use of this is illegal in most countries. Not the US but US prisons already are Dystopian so hey.
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    Is sexualization of short anime girls wrong?

    It’s pretty rare anime girls are just short and not literal kids.
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    How to write a proper killing intent.

    Killing intent is great for clearly establishing the stakes. It's unambigious. This person isn't considering killing or may be convinced not to. They will kill you. They are committed to the idea.
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    Intelligence vs wisdom

    Intelligence is knowing the definable. Facts. Certainty. Wisdom is the ability to navigate the undefinable. Truth. Justice. Human hearts.
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    Writing How do you deal with/prevent/manage power creep/rising stakes in story telling?

    There's a hard cap on power level, and any further power is gained by broadening your options and gaining tactical skill with what you have, not just amassing raw power.
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    A story similar to Ready Player One

    Isn’t this just all LitRPG? Do you mean a treasure hunt? An obscene amount of 80 references? Languishing in old media? Need more info
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    Worm: Have you read it?

    Yes, it's really good! His newer stuff is even better. I think their fight scenes are some of the best stuff I've read, they've got a talent for describing what should be rather messy complex fights in a simple, impactful way.
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    About signing a contract

    1500 words daily for a month is not worth $200. You could easily make that much from Patreon, Amazon publishing and/or Commissions for far less work.
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    On a scale of 1-10, how powerful is your character?

    A 3 with some enhanced reactions and increased stamina, but her partners go way higher on the scale
  16. Premier

    Life IS Fair

    If Karmas real how did I steal it? Karma kinda lacking
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    Are loser protagonists really relatable?

    I think most loser protagonists are a cop out. Like “They all hated me for being so smart” or what made them a loser just doesn’t apply anymore. They used to be losers but they’re not as soon as the story actually starts. People hate actual loser protagonists, how often do you see comments...
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    Pay me with your life

    The Hero transforms, glowing light writhing around their body as their flesh contorts into a more feminine form. Pieces of armour drop to the ground with a clatter as belts no longer hold fast to their body. "Weird flex," the Hero says, "Don't you die now?" "Oh sh-" And then the Villain exploded.
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    About Systems......

    Any story whose premise is "What if I set up something interesting and then my character refused to do it." is probably a bad idea.
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    How did fantasy medieval people gain superpower?

    If you're going to do Western Fantasy and don't get Fae Bullshit involved, what are you even doing?
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