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With how popular the GB tag is, it's weirder to not do it.

Absolutely anything to separate you from all the other Xianxia novels can only be a good thing.

Six words given, only needed three.

You’re releasing chapters barely 200 words long. The system will limit you being on the front page if you try to spam small updates.

Honestly, I doubt killing Pokémon would make many people happy unless the series is deliberately a very dark one. They're kinda cute pets after all.

The plot of Pokémon is so paper thin you can do pretty much whatever you want. Take it seriously and follow the game path. Have fights turned up to be deadly and make the world a nightmare to survive in. Have it be a cute slice of life with no fighting at all, just making friends with weird...

On a day I got 1400 views, only a single view came from people searching Action and 0 from Adventure. I got more views through "Monster Tamer" and that's pretty niche as it is. Action/Adventure is either too drowned out for people to find you, or nobody searches for tags that are generic. It's...

So what? Some will stay pay, let people mald in the comments all they want.

If you’re not writing smut why wouldn’t you post to RR? Double your audience, same way if you do write smut you should throw it in Ao3 and HF

Read it out loud to yourself. You’ll spot a lot of errors and weird phrasing you wouldn’t have otherwise.

It’s possible but it’s way more difficult. If you want to make money then smut commissions is where most of the money is. If you want to make money off non-smut best hope people willing to pay up for advance chapters and a lot of them.

Inner Monologue sucks. Have your character speak so people can react. Even talking to themselves is better. I'd only use it if there's a reason the character can't speak out but really wants to.

It's honestly how it should have always worked. Really appreciate the change.

First off there are some spelling mistakes that you should be able to pick up with a spell checker (psychiatrique, immediatly). You've also clipped some words ("currently t of a psychiatric") and aren't capitalizing correctly. Here it is with all that fixed. Like a lot of new writers, you...

I think the original had a better start, as it built some tension. It’s a little hard to keep track with all the writing in different image files for some reason.

I think you give away what's happening far too early. Part of the early hook is wondering what's going on. Shots in a school are already enough to draw people in and it'd be more interesting if you drew out the reason she was moving toward them a little. I'd save the revelation of the shooters...

You muddle the sentences a bit too much and there's a lot of passive voice. "Fear helped her heart pounded hard and widened her brown eyes." Would read a lot better if the action (Fear) came after the subject (Her Heart) "Brown eyes wide, her heart pounded from fear." Similarly "The gunfire...

Corpse Blood sounds like a good title. Blood Corpse sounds like you forgot the rest of the title.

I'm going to guess you probably weren't planning to sell your stuff in a Vietnamese market. It sucks they're stealing, but it's not like it's hitting an audience when 90% of the audience here is USA/Europe.

I agree, it often becomes people just throwing numbers at each other, which is rather boring to read. If I write RPG system worlds I like to keep the skills vague enough that their power limits and uses aren't clearly defined. Basically superpowers by another name. Helps you keep some tension...