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Thank you greatly for the in-depth review. I do admit the recent chapters have been missing something. I've had less time to write than before, and I also started another project that I'm slowly working on. I can understand the structuring of dialogue because I've gotten comments about there not...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/' I don't know what the aim is, one day I just decided to write and went from there. I've revised and revised the early chapters but ultimately I would just worry about if things are making sense and the writing is decent. Can't catch every...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/

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Got a single chapter if you are up for it. Prototype/Placeholder I'm using. Let me know what you think: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/79766/demonic-fate

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/79766/demonic-fate

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/79766/demonic-fate It's only one chapter. I would appreciate the feedback to be in this thread please and thank you. ?

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/79766/demonic-fate always love critique

I'll add to the pile of works, https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ and https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/79766/demonic-fate Lowly Ascent is a low fantasy-ish story involving manipulation and revenge, while also seeking freedom. Demonic Decent, the Mc is just a straight-up...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ Give it to me straight doc

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ Leaving a review would be appreciated. I also want to say thank you for taking the time to do this. You are appreciated! :blob_aww:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. Just so you know, there are descriptions of Death's voice relative to Cain but it's later in the chapter.

This is a chapter that recently released so it's in the middle of things. I'm only confident about my current writing so I hope you like it.

not BL

MC is a blank slate, one that is slightly unique but not really. Only through his environment does he become unique, he is broken down to be carved into a person who has unhealthy obsessions. Most of these obsessions are about the people around him, they are the only people he has and due to him...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/

MC is a blank slate, one that is slightly unique but not really. Only through his environment does he become unique, he is broken down to be carved into a person who has unhealthy obsessions. Most of these obsessions are about the people around him, they are the only people he has and due to him...

Thank you for the feedback, its unfortunate I didn't focus on emotions in the beginning. Again, thank you for taking the time to read and give me some feedback :blob_salute: I just also wanted to add, the stories I'm trying to make are ones anyone can enjoy in one way or another. I know it's...