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Just so you know I have just revised my first chapter, I went to read it after your feedback and you were right...everything was terrible. Alas I don't think I fixed the info dumping all to much but I tried to reduce it as much as possible. Let me know what you think about the Revision next...

True, but I think your feedback is pretty on point. I really just dove into writing without really thinking and only started changing how I wrote around chapter 30 or so. Even now I still have a problem with info dumping, I'm always looking to improve and and have been thinking about revising...

Thanks. Now I know I definitely gotta go back and fix what I wrote. If possible, could you read one of the more recent chapters, I feel like I've come a long way and I wish to know if I have indeed improved. Thank you again for the feedback, I will start revisions soon.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ Have at me

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ Thanks!

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ Don't know if I already replied but here it is.

Chapter 25

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ Tell me whatcha think

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ I'm looking on feedback for anything really. But I mostly want help on if my story flows smoothly or if my earlier chapters are worse then my later chapters. If that makes sense

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ Let me shamelessly recommend my own book. MC gets very evil I must say

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ First few chapters I plan to revise soon but I would be glad to hear your thoughts :)