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I've heard bad things about them. But just look at the contract and it'll tell you. From what I know you only really get like $400 a month, but at the cost of losing the intellectual rights of your work and having to write constantly. Again, I don't know the full details but there are videos on...

Honestly, I would have to search Xainxia up to know what it is. I've read novels of the genre I believe but I don't think my story is in its Genre. Probably in the beginning but it slowly drifts off I think.

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Thank you for the feedback:blob_aww:

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Thank you for the review. I think my problem with ',' and '.' is that when I got a review a while back, I was told I use ',' to much. Ever since I try to avoid using them.... It could also be that my keyboard is weird and puts multiple ',' and '.' down even if I press it once, then Grammarly...

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Thank you, I think I just got an epiphany. Edit: I tried doing what you said in chapters 20 and 20.5, if you want you can see how I did.

Thanks, I'll get on it right away. I don't think I can change much but I'll try. Thank you so much for the feedback (y) Edit: I fixed the tense errors you found, I also believe I made the story not centered on Feick by not mentioning his name in the beginning (Don't really know if that helps)...

It is, do you have any feedback on how I could not make it seem so dry?

No worries, a chapter range is perfect, I already planned on rewriting most of the story up to 25 so this works out great. Though you probably didnt like that range because it hasn't been revised yet so the writing worsened. Anyways, thank you so much!

Thanks for the rating, happy you enjoyed most of it. Do you know which chapters or areas lost you? For revising purposes of course :blob_okay:

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Amazing feedback, I do get where you're coming from with with the style and voice. Thinking back, I have been going back and forth between giving the narrator a personality and not. But I also like the idea that the narrator isn't omniscient, he's just describing it as it is. Also for the...

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Unfortunately so, the first conflict really does not make much sense but I didn't want to add stuff to explain. Accounted for it more towards a cultural thing people do to Contaminants or something. I really only wanted to focus on progressing the story. I did go back and tried to fix the...

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First, thank you so much for pointing out all my errors! You're the best! To explain, I used AI to fix grammar and typos but that only changed 3 words so then I just decided to try and fix it myself before continuing. After going through it manually I had the AI check it and give me suggestions...

Recently began fixing my story so tell me whatcha think https://www.scribblehub.com/read/727045-lowly-ascent/chapter/742101/