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It is working material. The MC's rivalry with Nazael is expected, then their potential reconciliation, along with hunting for those who wronged Nazael's mother. The idea for a soup is good, but part of the ingredients is missing.

Good day to you. Before we start, please keep in mind that I am the worst author around here, capable of producing nothing more than shit when it comes to writing. Take any of my advice with a grain of salt. With that out of the way, let me have a go at your story: This sentences are readable...

Honored Gabrielle. Good time of day to you. I hope you are doing great. A cup of tea sounds nice. Here's my lowly offer to you, a story I've been currently rewriting (so don't be surprised by the numbers; they're unearned. The rating should be far lower, but the people are kind)...

Don't judge yourself so low. There is an excellent measure of how good you are as a writer. Here is your story: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1545315-the-wandering-maidens-travel-guide/chapter/1545329/ . I have skimmed your chapters, and you have readers who care, read, and correct the...

Even the dialogue? That's fair, but I really tried and revisited the story several times, trying to make it good. But honest is honest, my skills are shit, and I am not meant to be an author. I'll finish the novel to the best of my ability, but I guess I am not meant for it even after a decade...

Thank you for your kind offer! I've been writing for about a decade now, but all my novels have failed to achieve what I wanted (at least a dozen comments). It is my fault, but I am too dumb (or arrogant) to understand the problem or a solution to the problem. If you could give your input on why...

Hello everyone, I hope you are doing great. I have two questions. I am rewriting one of my works and I would like to ask something. My idea for the story was to play around with the theme that the MC has a reason to want revenge, and she has been training herself, trying to get as high as...

Thank you for your kind offer! I am currently rewriting one of my works from scratch, so ignore the number of readers. Any input is welcomed. Here it is: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/517935/duty-empty-dreams-and-trying-not-to-become-a-monster/

Sorry to bother, but I need your wisdom. Here's the brief situation. We have a tribe of mutants serving an empire in a world recovering from a post-apocalypse. The mutants prefer to live apart from normal humans to maintain their way of life. They use their own terms for things (cub instead of...

Before we start, keep in mind that I am the worst writer on the site, so take any of my suggestions with a bag of salt. The MC comes off as an ass and this is the very start of your story! Whoever this Frey is, she gave a valid info and wasn't wasting his time at all. How is she playing? What...

Good time of day to you all; I hope you are doing great! Sorry to bother you, but I have a request if you have time to spare. One of my major flaws as a writer (besides overuse of showing when telling could be enough) was that my dialog sounded alien and unnatural. If it's not too much to ask...

Thank you for your kind offer! Here is my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1042505/hordedoom/ Feedback and an honest review would be awesome! Don't shy away from giving me a low score; I am not as good as most authors here yet, but I want to improve.

I am uploading regularly and have the story planned ahead and how it will affect my overall setting. When people said that my prologue was confusing, I rewrote it, and, yeah, it is better. I never lash out at the critique and try to learn how not to over-describe stuff... But hardly anyone read...

Thank you for your kind offer! Here is my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/860302/a-rats-problems/

Good time of day to you. You need to post a link to the story if you want anyone to answer.

Good day to you. Before we continue, please bear in mind that I am still a very bad writer and have much to learn. Take my words with a grain... a bag of sand. With that out of the way: Consider finding a way not to start most sentences with an "I" or with too many similar words. It creates...

Good day to you all, I hope you are all healthy and doing great. Sorry for being a bother, but I need fresh perspective, if you have time to spare. Could you please read these two chapters: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1093034/...

Utterly depends on the character. Take Kenshiro, for example. Barely struggles to win a fight, but he is humorous: And ten times more interesting and complicated than the most OP revenge protagonists. It's not the power, it's not the struggles, it's how you shape a character that matters.

Good day to you. Before we continue, please bear in mind that I am still a very bad writer and have much to learn. Take my words with a grain... a bag of sand. With that out of the way...

To be honest, all I want is to write a book that other people like. You know, to have a fandom that I can keep writing for and that will discuss my novels. The rest (fame, money, etc.), don't hold much relevance for me.