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One of the main recomdation given to me initially (in another thread) was to write a story that involves a system. I am of the opinion that it is possible to create an engaging OF using it. I can't do it, because my head begins to hurt when I lay all characters' interractions and then sit and...

Apologies. I am not very bright. I'll re-read it at home and will try to apply the advice. The story is already completed (it's around a million words long; it took me six months to write). I am currently doing the fourth or the fifth (I lost count) draft. Basically I open a chapter and...

Read comments of the readers based on the trending novels and try to imagine and write a story based on their preferences then?

Thank you all for the advice! (and apologies for sparking such a heated argument. You are all wonderful people). So, the general idea is to check out the popular series (currently I am reading War Queen, Hohenfels, and Epilogue on RR. No idea if they count as popular, but I like them) to try and...

Sorry for being a bother, but I need guidance. I want to write at least one story in my life that can earn, in an honest way, 200 watchers on it and some comments. So far, no matter how hard I try, nothing works out in this direction, and each of my works is worse than the last. It feels awful...

I assume that Taijin is a city, while Meru is a river or an inland sea (because of the mention of a coast). Probably a river, since there's mention of a center.

Hello! Before the start, please keep in mind that I am the worst writer around these parts. Take any of my advice with a grain of salt. With that out of the way, let's start: This is excessive. That emptiness is confusing for any new readers. Either remove it and paste the text directly, or add...

Nice time of day to you. Before we start, keep in mind that I am the worst writer around here, vomiting awful and uninteresting stories. Be aware before following any of my feedback or advice. With that out of the way, let's begin...

Can't help you here. Sexual content is not my forte.

Not a reader, but thank you for your efforts. You are awesome.

Can you provide an example? I have yet to see any toxic comments on any story I've been reading so far on this site or on RR.

Hello! Before we start, keep in mind that I'm the most worthless writer possible, capable only of failing. Take care about accepting any feedback from me. With that out of the way, here are my basic thoughts: Nothing wrong with the structure, but highlight the system somehow. Ding! Welcome...

Good day to you. Please keep in mind that I am the worst author around here, incapable of producing anything worth reading. Be cautious about listening to my words or implementing any of my advice. With that out of the way, let's start...

Good day to you all. This time, I've decided to write a story in my native language first and then translate it into English. Here's an excerpt from the beginning: I need to know: 1) If it is readable. 2) If I overexplain or overdescribe stuff. 3) If Ruda feels too scummy and Rustam is too...

You mean this chapter, right? https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1617950-undead-proxs/chapter/1626202/ ? Sure, let's go. Keep in mind that I am the worst author around here and my stories are boring trash, so take my every word with a bag of salt. First problem, the length. It is over 4,000...

Hi, everyone, Rookieqw is here. I hope you are doing great. I need help. I've been using AI checkers (no one reads my slop) for advice about style and grammar. In addition to the usual "Show, don't tell", "Expand backstory" and "Use more polite language" all four of them showed that I changed...

Good day to you. Before we start, please keep in mind that I am the worst author around here, capable of producing nothing more than shit when it comes to writing. Take any of my advice with a grain of salt. The good news is, your novel doesn't suck. There's a bare minimum of two favorites per...

Readers out there are nice. They are often willing to point out grammar mistakes, offer encouragement, and the like, despite the fact that I am a horrendous writer. I have never had a bad interaction with any of them. The authors are also mostly great (they taught me how to do shoutouts and...

Happy birthday!

No, I am many things, but I try not to lie about my skills. I have objective proof that I am a bad author; the feedback threads where I score the lowest compared to the rest of the authors objectively prove it, as these threads are done by various people. Sure, I am envious, but I don't want...