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Use some spears, maces, morningstars (not the devil, the weapon!), or hammers, you edgy bastards!

This is awesome! Since I have four views on chapter 128 (based on the statistic) and no one has commented for a while, I think your theory is correct. It is not well written and not engaging.

Good day to all, sorry for being a bother, but I need advice. I've been writing for a little while, but readers almost never comment on my story, and I think it's because my work is boring or just bad quality, but I don't know for sure. When I read novels by other writers here, I often see...

Nothing wrong with unique story beginnings. But this? https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1409452-the-walkers-series--reborn/chapter/1409461/ it is excessive. Maybe when you become a well-known author with myriads of fans who know your style, it'll work. But right now? It scares readers away, IMO...

Oh, I am aware. I read the author's novel on RR. But this book seems to follow a different set of characters, and the information was better given to us (IMO, of course) in the other novel.

Welcome to the site! I hope you'll enjoy it here. I don't know if it is the rule or if my instincts go haywire, but everything in me is screaming that it shouldn't be " Mama was lovely." , but "She was lovely.", because of the way you structured the second paragraph. Maybe a shadow dimension...

It is my immaturity as a writer. For example, on another site, a reader told me that I hate gays after reading this chapter, which involves Jaquan https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1223062/ . I apologized and asked what is wrong, but the reader said they couldn't follow...

What about if an author leans into comedy or explores other themes? OPM worked just fine, as an example.

I've been using ProWritingAid to edit errors in my work, and recently I've been getting notifications that I often tell more than I show in my work. This happened with my last few chapters, and I am worried about it. If anyone has some free time to spare, is it possible for you to tell me if the...

An idea hits my mind. I sit down and write a very short outline, marking motivations, plot points, and reasons. I create a separate file named decriptons (it is very easy to forget who was injured or about a plot relevant emblem). I draw a rough map using whatever tools I have. Then I start...

Sorry to be a bother, but where is it best to post on Russian resources? I am not looking to make a рубль или копейка, but I'd love people to read and comment on my stories. However I never found a proper analog to this site or RR in my homeland.

I don't hate RR. I like it and enjoy the readers who comment on my stories there. My only negative experiences comes from its occasional authors who PM you, telling you that they liked your story and asking for a swap. So, as a good human being, you accept the swap to help out the new author, do...

Keep in mind, using "was" or passive voice is not always bad. If it is good for Tolkien and other authors, then it is good for you.

For grammar, I recommend using QuillBot first, then DeepL. Keep in mind that DeepL likes to rewrite the stuff you have written, so keep an eye on it. ProWritingAid is also a good helper, but it hates words like "was" and asks you to rewrite sentences. Just copy and paste, say, Tolkien or Ursula...

What pfp stands for? Pay for phone?

You can't do it without a few things. Read more (not just books, but also manga (today's comic art is garbage)) to help you visualize things. Next, research. For example, if I write "mobile artillery". What would I mean, towed artillery or self-propelled artillery vehicles? Both may technically...

Go for it, tiger! https://www.scribblehub.com/read/860302-a-rats-problems/chapter/860305/ or https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1050298/ . Choose what you want to roast more.

Sorry to bother you with my selfish request, but I need your advice, if you have time to procrastinate. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1294952/ skip to " And here goes Mungke " How to properly show that the Purebloods distrust Iron Lord and that he cares about his...

Feng Shen Ji.

I recommend trying the Usogui manga, but the situations there mostly happen when the author cleverly tricks the reader and the characters make incorrect guesses. Some situations are funny, some scary, but in general the read is awesome.