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    Free Story Feedback [READ REQUIREMENTS]

    Thanks for your offer. If I understand correctly, the chapter can be from any place in the story as long as it doesn't get confusing, right? If so, then I'd like your opinion on whether Marco and Cordi seem like friends, on the flaws in my style, and on how badly the chapter is written in...
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    What do you call a group of homeless orphans?

    Street urchins.
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    Reincarnation mangas and novels. What haven't you seen yet?

    A reincarnate who hates the afterlife because their previous life was so shitty that they want to not exist. And reincarnation is like a middle finger to them, because they're sure they'll just fail again. A reincarnate who wants to find a way back to their original Earth, as they miss their...
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    Black Myth Wukong is fun

    I watched it via YouTube. Seems like a cool game; I will buy it in a few months, after several optimization patches. Sadly, it is one of these games that is awesome, but lag might ruin your enjoyment.
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    [Submissions Closed] Unreliable Feedback v2

    Thank you! I was worried that maybe my novel is complete gibberish in terms of grammar writing (I am not very smart and English is not my native language). But based on the feedback I've received, that doesn't seem to be the case. So my failure lies in my immaturity of introducing characters...
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    I hate thieves

    I had my apartment robbed twice. The police failed to do anything about that. Yeah, it sucks having to fix everything after that.
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    I'm in the mood to read.

    Here is my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1042515/ Fair warning, I am a pretty bad writer.
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    Your opinions on the ending of My Hero Academia manga

    Honestly, it is hilarious how Bakugou, who bullied Deku and even offered him to commit suicide in the past, gets to keep his superpower, while Deku lost his power and everyone forgot about him for years. He only became needed when he gained another power, while Bakugou was praised as a top hero...
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    How to improve as an author?

    You are right, but I have tried posting to several sites and the result is the same everywhere. I want to believe that my stories aren't bad, but if I get the same result everywhere I post them, then the problem lies with me. It's me who can't write an interesting story, who can't create good...
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    I don't know if I know how to write a story or not

    Based on your previous work, you're doing just fine. Give it a try; you can always stop and delete it if people won't like it.
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    How to improve as an author?

    Certaines personnes ont des difficultés à apprendre. C'est pourquoi nous demandons de l'aide pour trouver une orientation ou une méthode d'apprentissage.
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    How to improve as an author?

    Sorry to bother you, but I need advice if you have time to burn. I've been writing for a little while, but I'm still suck and can't write a good story to save my life, despite wanting to write. Writing is a hobby for me, but it is irritating for me to not be able to improve. So far I have been...
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    What monsters or creatures can be good bodyguard?

    Wonder of U from JJBA is an excellent bodyguard.
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    It's okay! I am in no hurry. Your personal life takes priority, and never let anyone say otherwise.

    It's okay! I am in no hurry. Your personal life takes priority, and never let anyone say otherwise.
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    Uncensored Feedback [6/6]

    Thank you for your kind offer! Here is my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1050298/
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    Unusual Feedback Thread

    Thank you for your feedback and the awesome hard work you are doing! Sorry about the mistakes in the tenses; English is not my native language, and there is still an ocean of what I do not know and do not understand. I will strive to improve my dialogue, be better at wording and separating...
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    Fairy Feedback v2

    Thank you for your feedback! Yes, of course you can.
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    The Hive 2.0(Free Feedback Thread)

    Thank you for your kind offer! Here is my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1050298/
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    Fairy Feedback v2

    Thank you for the kind offer! Here is my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/860302-a-rats-problems/chapter/860305/
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    First 3 Chapter Feedback

    Thank you for the kind offer! Here is my story https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1042505-hordedoom/chapter/1050298/
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