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  1. Sergeandgreen

    Don't mind me. Just sharing some art work for my stories in progress.

    Yeah, thats what i could theoretically do with inpainting. I have the tools for free, but a single image generation with my laptop takes like ten minutes. So my stingy mind will hate me if i pay for something i can do myself. I don't know if Nijijourney also keeps the artstyle but with the way i...
  2. Sergeandgreen

    Storyidea: A Sci-Fi slice of life romance lit rpg.

    Well, its a story that spans years. And the thing is that after a few hundred years of doing similar stuff memories meld together. The brain only processes and memorizes new experiences. (That's the reason why you have the feeling that time is going faster as you age). So yeah he is old as fuck...
  3. Sergeandgreen

    Don't mind me. Just sharing some art work for my stories in progress.

    Well, i guess that is one of the major problems of Ai. The faces look always similar. But i guess that is a problem many art styles share. Or at least within an artstyle the faces are limited. I wanted to add a little birthmark on her left cheek for a bit of individuality, but it just got her...
  4. Sergeandgreen

    Don't mind me. Just sharing some art work for my stories in progress.

    Well, i generated it on civitai with a DucHaiten-Pony-XL (no-score) and a number of different loras, for the hair, for added detail and stuff. Also, i already reworked the fingers a few times. But my laptop is currently at its limit. He died like two times while trying to fix the fingers. And...
  5. Sergeandgreen

    Don't mind me. Just sharing some art work for my stories in progress.

    Yeah, unlike with people in real live, hair color really bring personality into the picture Never said it was anything else. But I wouldn't be able to draw an image like the one i generated or the ones you uploaded so i use what i have. And i like what i can do with it.
  6. Sergeandgreen

    Storyidea: A Sci-Fi slice of life romance lit rpg.

    Thats the reason i limited the skill slots to 8 active (i'm german and i just mispelled it becaus in german its aktiv) skills and 8 inactive skills. Even if you reach lets say, level 1 million. you would only have 18 inactive skills while and 8 active skills as a villager. Also, i think i forgot...
  7. Sergeandgreen

    Don't mind me. Just sharing some art work for my stories in progress.

    First of all, i hope real artists aren't offended by me posting this in this channel. But as i spent the last few hours on this image, i had the urge to share it. So what do you think, isn't she lovely?
  8. Sergeandgreen

    Storyidea: A Sci-Fi slice of life romance lit rpg.

    Hello guys, Instead of writing my main story i wrote like 10k words of a new story i got the idea for while shopping for grocceries. So the idea is that you have a world, like earth that got a system in ancient times. Lets say 2000 BC. The system has a stat called vitality, which besides...
  9. Sergeandgreen

    Magical Theory Crafting: The Mutable - Immutable Spectrum

    You definitely shower too long. Also, writing a story with such a magic system would be quite demanding on the reader. You basically expect them to learn real science and your pseudo science.
  10. Sergeandgreen

    Draft Idea 1: My Useless Academy Squad

    I can't take mcs who get an absurd gold finger seriously. I like it when someone uses the known in a unique way to make himself special. So no unique cheats from me.
  11. Sergeandgreen

    Word Count

    Microsoft word also counts the words for you. And if you want to know how many words a chapter has, you just have to mark it.
  12. Sergeandgreen

    Magical Experiences

    I read that in this context. Maybe its a sign that it's late and i should go to bed. Well, having a "pro" is always "better". Otherwise they wouldn't be "pros". At least not in the sense of the definition. If you mean prostitutes, i would say that while they definitely would have the...
  13. Sergeandgreen

    Magical Experiences

    Well, i recently was on the end of (school-)year mass and there was this 8th grade girl who was led to the front and started to sing "a million dreams". Without any tools for assistance or anything. Just pure singing skills. I got gosumps. Her voice was absolutely brilliant. In my opinion it was...
  14. Sergeandgreen

    Is your worldbuilding is populated enough?

    Well, at the moment i try to balance introducing and describing side characters and moving the plot forward. You can't stop at every corner and tell how many people are waiting at the traffic light. To circumvent that problem, i let the character do something in the towns and cities he visits...
  15. Sergeandgreen

    Bag of question

    The hat is jet black, the scarf is crimson, the coat is dark brown, the shirt black. The ammunition belt is also black.
  16. Sergeandgreen

    Bag of question

    If it isn't English and she doesn't say it, it means the language will immediately tell you the country. That means spanish is most likely out (despite the Hola at the beginning). So my bet is on Germany or balkans. Germany, because a good percentage of the users on this site are german and...
  17. Sergeandgreen

    How to improve as an author?

    Well, just doing something a 100 times doesn't necessarily make you better. You have to actively think about how to improve. In writing, that means analysing what you wrote, thinking of ways to improve them, actually improving them, and repeating that so often until the mistakes you usually need...
  18. Sergeandgreen

    How to explain a complex power system.

    Just a question. If its not a hidden master fragment but just a normal pickle jar talking to you, would you still skip it? Also:
  19. Sergeandgreen

    How to explain a complex power system.

    10k infodump chapter confirmed. I already have your story on my to read list. Maybe i should start with it tomorrow.
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