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Yeah, Kiss is good for a simple power fantasy. But in a way I want the reader to explore the world together with the mc. That means, getting to know side characters that have a real background and motives, countries have their own culture and and a flora and fauna that adjusted to the...

Thank you for the idea but that was exactly what i didn't want to do. I always thought it was just a convenient way for a mc to grow step by step and never meet an opponent he can't defeat. So i want to build a completely functioning society with mortals, cultivators, and immortals. (Immortals...

The 7k words are an extra worksheet for myself where i just describe each stage, what abilities they give, how they are trained, how they affect toher stages etc. It's just for myself. I never planned to give that out as it is. It was just that while writing it I realized that it would be a lot...

So the anchor can decide who loops and who doesn't?

Well, since creating the thread, i have written a lesson to get a feeling for it. 1,5k words just for the first stage of one path. But its the foundation of the foundation. But yeah, i definitely plan to only give him access to a few things beyond his current power. I didn't want to make a...

Yeah, i definitely wanted to work with a glossary. I mean just the list of elements is so long that i will only mention one or two secondary elements and put the rest in a table in the author notes. What is your opinion on lessons? Does it count as a dialog?

I would say the most difficult part about this is giving him a relatable motive or reason for actions you can only describe as atrocious. The reason for that is that not many people would do something evil just for the sake of evil. On the contray, even the most evil person would have a reason...

Hello, I recently started to write a xianxia story (not released yet) and build a complete interconnected cultivation system. Like three different paths, with ten stages each, where each stage has something that can be improved or gives new abilities. Just the rough sketch for that takes up 7k...

Okay, that definitely helps. Do you already know who the anchor is? And how long is the loop? From the title i assume GoT is the main universe you are in, right? The anchor should be someone that actually makes a good progression in the story. Or, but this would require really good writing, a...

Well, you give him the ultimatum that when he leaves, his sister has to leave too. He sounds like a guy that values his family. Now the question is, how to give the mc the ultimatum and by whom. It could be the sister herself, it could be one of the metric shit ton of people who would loose a...

Is this your version of an attempt to advertise your story or why do you make the same thread twice within two days. And if you really want to get ideas, maybe outline what this infinity loops concept is about. Then you could get ideas. Because at the moment I'm confused about the fandoms you...

Rich people who are to rich to understand poor peoples problems. Sometimes they are so far away that despite being increadibly stupid, its funny.

I would ignore those messages. I mean, like you said, why would you want his ideas. Or worse, pay for them. I don't understand who falls for things like that. I mean, i can halfway understand it when you fall for someone who wants to promote your story, or wants to trick you into an exclusive...

"clemencies" comes to mind or "exonerations" Both fit but don't fit at the same time. But even if they fit, i wouldn't use them. They probably cause more confusion than help, and no one talks like that. Amnesties falls into the same category.

Well, as it wasn't specified that it had to be English literature. I never finished "Tauben im Gras" (Pigeons in the grass). Never finished the book, and i even failed to finish the audiobook. I read half of a summary before going to the exam. Even Kafka's "Verwandlung" which basically means...

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/81791/behemoth-primordial-titan-cultivationlitrpg This might fit what you are looking for.

Just write it yourself, then. No one will be able to describe it exactly as you imagine it except yourself.

Well, skill is generally the ability to do something. In this case the "skills" enable you to do something you otherwise couldn't. So i would argue that skill is the correct term. There naturally is also the person who can be skilled. So he is able to do stuff well even without external help...

I generally prefer OTP instead of harems. Is this for or against Milfs? I personally don't like the trope. I can certainly agree to that. What do you guys think of a dying person x any other person. Where it's inevitable is a tragedy. When i read and saw this trope once it felt just sad, but...

You only published 4,000 words and are already in need of ideas? But if you really need it, here are some of ideas: Publishing Cercei's and Jamie's incest relationship, while Robert Baratheon is still alive. Preventing Drago's death. Killing that incest guy, sacrificing his male children...