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"What problem Vol'yir need resolution." "Me didn't bathe blood. Hairless-monkee banged me head. Me slept." "Therapist know resolution." bent down to retrieve a club. "Me beat you. Me bathe Therapist blood?" "Vol'yir not understood. Vol'yir needed more Orc Pride. Me therapist teach you...

You're right it didn't have anything to push the readers to lift the second page. Also, the first two is the only slice of life to show just how far Jane have fallen down the rabbit hole. For the reviving of of religion, actually, no one believes it. In the story 95% we're not religious as they...

Can I have one for In His Will?

I would like feedback on mine as well. In His Will

I would like feedback on mine as well. In His Will

No no, it's fine I like the feedback. Also for the rogue body parts, it's kind of intended because once Jane started looking into the future she doesn't move the body because she is only watching but she can still feel the touch, the movement, and everything else. Sorry to hear about your...

May I look at your story? I have ADD so if it doesn't catch my attention I might not be able to finish a chapter.

No, no. This is fine as I never get any feedback so I don't even know what to improve.

May I have a review for this one? In His Will. Feedback in thread pls

What are some AI-generated novels? I didn't even know this existed.

Wait... that's the norm here?

P.S. Don't believe my poem. I'm just a sore loser with 20 losing streaky in dota 2 XD. I hate your novel so much, Envy. It's the worst!

Bitter, I am to life, why barely winning? Born and praised to succeed yet where is my sitting? Doubtful of the intelligence they kept singing, Never resonates with a sore loser, afraid of the hardship of living. Stable was the finances before. But guttered and terrified to find for more...

It's a little hard to get feedback on my story In His Will, especially since I'm trying not to write a cliche, so any feedback would help me. Even if it's just the first chapter, because I think that's an important chapter to grab the reader's attention.

Thank you, kind person!

I would also like one if you don't mind. In His Will

Careful, almost delicate footsteps echoed through the hallways as Althea walked toward her children’s room. With each step, her mind fought with itself, telling her not to, that there was still a chance to fix everything. To pretend that everything was still normal, as it always had been. She...

You will never know what lies beyond the future of your choice. Standing at the altar thinking about what will be the least painful experience. Weighing each choice will never give you the knowledge you so desperately seek. Xelth, you will choose the most painful path, I assure you. "Shut up...