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I got this by typing random words out of boredom, and I mean really random. Feel free to write a premise or even a synopsis just by looking at it: My own short premise for this is along the lines of March Comes In Like a Lion but with three main characters and their families interacting with...

Thanks for the feedback! When I wrote "devoid of life," I went for the idea that there was no sign of sentient life when Hajime arrived. Sometimes, adjectives are a necessity rather bogging down the writing. I also emphasized Hajime as "he" the most because it's mostly written through his...

Okay, I know @greyblob bumped this thread for no reason, lol, but I wanna know if you have the time to take a look at my draft. I don't mind if you won't anyway. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1R_tt7jqJfVipPEXXdFbxTc0PP5_ZrWGsB1ckWbk6X-w/edit?usp=drivesdk

So, I should just do what Super Supportive's author did, then. I remember them deleting a bunch of other stories under their belt that never pulled through, and they only hit big by simplifying their synopsis and prose and doing shout-outs.

Should I publish my draft now? Both here and on Royal Road? I have 20 chapters written already, but only 6 of them are even fairly intelligible thanks to Grammarly and many nights of revisions. It's why my draft feels so little at the moment whenever I ask for feedback, and why the latest...

Shot in the dark, but I'm gonna ask feedback for my draft here to see if you have the time. If you do, let's say my story's setting is less inspired by standard isekai RPG mechanics and more inspired by the roguelike genre, especially Vampire Survivors and HoloCure...

Yes, your eyes don't deceive you. It's a bonafide, rusty old computer from the 80s, but it's ✨?sentient?✨. And let's just say my main villain is heavily inspired by a certain Harlan Ellison novel about hate and circuits. ;)

Honestly, it's one of the more "unique" novels I've read on this site so far. "Unique" because it's not about fighting orcs and goblins and defeating Arblargaroth the Terrible, nor is it about a young upstart high schooler cultivating/gaining experience to kill the God of Gods in a flurry of...

Thank you! I understand the pacing is much faster than the usual web novel, and this is because I have a tendency of wanting to wrap things up in less than 1.7k works. I mean, sure, a word count like that isn't out of the ordinary, but I get what you mean. I can try stretching scenes just a...

Good evening. I know my story is still in draft form, but I would still love to hear you thoughts about this litRPG I've been working on. Just type your feedback here on this thread if you can. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1R_tt7jqJfVipPEXXdFbxTc0PP5_ZrWGsB1ckWbk6X-w/edit?usp=drivesdk That...

Okay, so I do have an excerpt for my chapter 2 that shows him abusing the respawn mechanic just so he can kill more monsters with no real reason. But I dropped it because it made him feel more like a depraved villain, and I mean like nearing on Judge Holden levels of evil. Since I won't even use...

Thanks for the critique! Though, I will say you seem to have forgotten a few dialogue boxes that explain some things you've said. It was stated in the first chapter that the MC is "just like the others," in that he's intentionally shallow and full of himself all because unique skill gives him...

Thank you! It's still a draft, but I hope you enjoy it. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1R_tt7jqJfVipPEXXdFbxTc0PP5_ZrWGsB1ckWbk6X-w/edit?usp=drivesdk

Thank you! It's still in draft form, but I hope you'll enjoy it if you're into litRPGs. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1R_tt7jqJfVipPEXXdFbxTc0PP5_ZrWGsB1ckWbk6X-w/edit?usp=drivesdk

Thank you in advance! I've been working on Google Docs draft after months of writing fanfics I didn't even enjoy on Wattpad and AO3. If you're into litRPGs, you might take interest in this since it doesn't really follow the same mechanics as other stories. It's more inspired by roguelikes like...

Thank you! It's still a Google Docs draft, but I've been on this litRPG story for a few weeks now. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1R_tt7jqJfVipPEXXdFbxTc0PP5_ZrWGsB1ckWbk6X-w/edit?usp=drivesdk

I haven't finished chapter 5 yet, but I hope I will once you get to my Google Docs draft. It's somewhat of a unique take on litRPGs due to being inspired by the roguelike genre like Vampire Survivors...

I don't know if you read isekai litRPGs, but you can check out my draft anytime. After many boring months writing cliché fanfics on Wattpad and AO3, I decided to write something a bit more unique for the genre. The premise is heavily inspired by Vampire Survivors and other similar roguelikes...

Thank you. As for the opening chapter, I tried cramming in as much info on how the roguelike mechanics work as possible without resorting to just telling the reader like a manual from the start. That aside, if you're wondering what roguelike game inspired me to write this, it's Vampire...

Good morning. None of you probably remember me, but I'm the guy who wants feedback through their Google Docs drafts, lol. As for where I've been in almost a year, I've been writing stories on Wattpad and AO3, but even though they got suprisingly good traction, I felt disillusioned. I wasn't...