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  1. PBJ_Time

    which LOtR character's your fav?

    I picked Frodo because he's very complex and was strong-willed until the end, but yeah, I love Gandalf too.
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    [Free] Another another ai images thread

    Thanks for the reassurance. Also, yes, I want him to look like that, as well as an Asuna with lavender hair.
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    David Lynch Isekai

    That was the idea, actually. It's about reality in the otherworld crumbling and becoming nonsensical, and the MC has little clue on what to do.
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    David Lynch Isekai

    Although I'm still busy with my litRPG draft, I felt like I should definitely write something like this as a future project. The story begins as usual with the MC waking up in another world. However, instead of being reborn as an infant or simply transported into some generic village, the MC is...
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    [Free] Another another ai images thread

    anime style 3 Alright, I'll cut to the chase. I want two separate images of a young man and a young woman. I want them to look exactly like Kirito and Asuna from SAO (wielding their preferred weapon and all), but the former is wearing a red coat like a cape, and the latter has lavender hair...
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Oh, don't worry. I've decided to rework the second document because, well, I felt it could still a lot better. I'll notify you someday.
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    Controversial Summary Feedback [CLOSED]

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GKOPg3RRAes8lQYFItBTT8BqoUIu68ETlI-6qqk2zs4/edit?usp=drivesdk The MC is the leader of a revolutionary group (who began by freeing slaves and toppling monarchies) who set out to kill every god in their game world. Or at least kill enough of them until they stop...
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    Free feedback thread.

    Glad you remember me, lol. As for if I have any questions, I only have one. Is my knowledge on litRPG stats decent enough or is it completely abysmal? Edit: actually, I have another question. I've been meaning to use my second draft as a starting point of my novel, but so far, the other...
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    First Chapter Analysis

    Thank you! However, I do have some questions unrelated to the litRPG aspect of my story. What do you think about my MC? Does he appeal to both RR and SH? Should I tone down some of his traits?
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    Synopsis Feedback

    Hello. I just want you to know I revised my synopsis to make it clearer. I hope you understand now, instead of arguing with @TheMonotonePuppet, even though they were right on the money with what I was going for.
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    Synopsis Feedback

    Well, I was going to emphasize that the gods also shoot lightning bolts at "heretics" (read: people with slight grievances a doubts), but it felt it was gonna make my synopsis too long to follow. Maybe I should emphasize this all along? Also, again, the church thing is just a metaphor.
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    Synopsis Feedback

    It's a metaphor about how gods in Parallaxis are literally spying on everyone from above, instead of leaving them alone and being mentioned in places of worship or in someone's prayers. Frankly, it's mostly about my view on organized religion, what with the country I'm living in (Philippines).
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    Synopsis Feedback

    I recently revised my synopsis last night, with the goal to make it as short as possible while also making it as concise as possible. Please let me know what you think. Slay The Cross [Isekai LitRPG] Hajime always believed that fire was the greatest tool of all. A young rebel’s heart would be...
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    More potential covers for my upcoming novel

    No, it's about revolutionaries (who began by freeing slaves and toppling monarchies) deciding to kill all the gods in their world.
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    More potential covers for my upcoming novel

    Once again, I dabbled with Playground AI, mainly changing the filter, and these are what I got. This one was, sadly, my least favorite. Why? Because the next two ones are even better imo. What I loved the most about this was the background, but it felt like it wouldn't fit the actual setting...
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    Cover for my upcoming novel

    It's supposed to be a cross but came out pretty wild, lol.
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    Cover for my upcoming novel

    Any chance there's a really good title maker program out there? The only thing that pops up in my head is Canva.
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    Cover for my upcoming novel

    So, I was dabbling with Playground AI until I got this image that, tbh, goes really effing hard: I only have one question. If readers on SH and RR see this, will they click on it?
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    Cover for my upcoming novel

    Oh, shit, I posted this on the wrong topic, I think. I was gonna post this on Author General, lol. Oh, well. I guess it won't hurt if I show it there.
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