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  1. PBJ_Time

    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Please let me know what you think. I'm sorry if the formatting looks strange. I was gonna upload this as a PDF, but the story still needed work. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a4FzyNLHgwHGKcZLbDvRHDFu9W49SXxnqd7_4gqV5vQ/edit?usp=drivesdk
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    My little reading corner. Story feedback. Quality not assured. Opinions reign supreme.

    Please let me know what you think. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a4FzyNLHgwHGKcZLbDvRHDFu9W49SXxnqd7_4gqV5vQ/edit?usp=drivesdk
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    Quacky's synopsis review

    Here you go. I must warn you that the story takes quite of a detour from the MC to introduce the lives of two other character that'll be his future companions. However, it will pick up the pace once I write chapters 7 and 10. I won't be able to do that now, but I hope this is a good introduction...
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    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Oh, me, me! I hope the formatting doesn't burn your retinas. This was originally gonna be uploaded as a PDF, but it still needs work. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a4FzyNLHgwHGKcZLbDvRHDFu9W49SXxnqd7_4gqV5vQ/edit?usp=drivesdk
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    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    I've got a synopsis, a prologue, and 6 chapters at the ready, including several character profiles. Please let me know what you think. I was gonna upload the PDF version of this, but after some thought, it still needed work. I'll be actively editing this draft as we speak. Thank you...
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    Looking for Artist Request for cover art (AI is perfectly fine)

    Yup, that's the one. Once again, thanks so much, fam. I appreciate it. Also, for everyone else here, you can still show me what you have in mind. I won't close the thread any time soon. I'm just curious.
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    Looking for Artist Request for cover art (AI is perfectly fine)

    Oh, I'm so sorry. I want the one where the last image is. That was embarrassing. ?
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    Looking for Artist Request for cover art (AI is perfectly fine)

    Perfection. I actually like the ones where he has serrated teeth, lol. You can go with that. Anyway, thank you so much. I thought this thread would last forever, but I'm still open to seeing other people's interpretations. You're cooking real good.?
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    Looking for Artist Request for cover art (AI is perfectly fine)

    I'd say the first image looks best, the one where he has those lightning marks on his arm.
  10. PBJ_Time

    Looking for Artist Request for cover art (AI is perfectly fine)

    Well, I tried using Nemu's AI generator again and got this: It's not on point with what I really want, but it's pretty close. I have no idea why he has sunglasses here though. Okay, I change my mind. These pics goes way, way harder than I ever could have created using AI, lol. His name is...
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    Looking for Artist Request for cover art (AI is perfectly fine)

    Oh, great. It's just as bad as all the other prompts I tried. Maybe I should've also clarified that he looks way older than any of these images, and I mean like he has a stubble and a pronounced chin.
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    Looking for Artist Request for cover art (AI is perfectly fine)

    Okay. He's fair skinned with sort black spiky hair that stands up. You can forget about the color since he's generating lightning from them. Also, he looks less like the usual teenage anime boy and more like an actual adult in his 20s.
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    Looking for Artist Request for cover art (AI is perfectly fine)

    Oh, fudge, I'm so sorry. I meant lightning. I didn't see that…
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    Looking for Artist Request for cover art (AI is perfectly fine)

    I'll just make my request as simple and concrete as possible, starting with the following: 1. A cool looking dude (in his mid 20s) wearing a blue Hawaiian shirt, unbuttoned and wearing nothing underneath. 2. He has a big wide grin on his face while cracking his knuckles. 3. He's generating...
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    You can review the first draft if you want. I'm reworking the other one in the meantime.

    You can review the first draft if you want. I'm reworking the other one in the meantime.
  16. PBJ_Time

    I made an interesting synopsis using ChatGPT

    Probably. It'd be an interesting idea to write about.
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    I made an interesting synopsis using ChatGPT

    Technically, I made it through writing a premise and letting the AI rewrite it for better clarity.
  18. PBJ_Time

    I made an interesting synopsis using ChatGPT

    So I was bored and dabbled with some story ideas with the AI, and I got something that was surprisingly intriguing. What do you think? If this is interesting enough, I may just write this in the future.
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    [Free] Another another ai images thread

    Thank you! Can you do my other request as well? Please let me know.
  20. PBJ_Time

    [Free] Another another ai images thread

    Hello again. I just want typical litRPG mobs this time. A dog-sized spider with a coin symbol on its forehead. A pitch-black, gooey abomination with piercing red eyes and razor sharp teeth. Hope these two work!
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