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Thank you. I'll read your first chapter now, so please let me know when you're done with your review for my own story.

Thanks, fam. I was worried my story would be just a bunch of word vomit like my previous drafts. Do you have a story of your own?

I already published my book after a million revisions, so I might as well review other people's first chapters while they review mine. Like I said before, I'll read anything, including smut, gender bender, etc. I'm not picky. If you're into isekai litRPGs, please let me know what you think...

8 readers already, in less than 9 hours publishing my story. 0_0

Good morning. I also think you wrote a solid first chapter, too. I didn't expect a superhero story, but it was appreciated. The way you made your MC's monologuing pretty quirky kinda reminds me of my previous drafts. Some of your paragraphs were a bit of a wall of text to read through, so I...

I was worried why my story wasn't showing up on the site, but then I realized it still needs to be approved by the staff a la Royal Road. Oh, well, at least I finally published the first chapter instead of keeping it in the backlog.

I'd love to, and if it's not too much to ask, I'd also love for a feedback swap because I posted my own story an hour ago. It's not approved yet, but I can wait. What do you say? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1285692/beware-the-horde-isekai-litrpg/

I finally published my book and thought I would do this for others. It's not approved yet, but I can wait. Any feedback for my story (that finally isn't a draft) will be much appreciated. I'll read any story, including smut, gender bender, or whatever kinky shit you write. My book is in the...

Oh, don't worry. I've put my work set to launch on that site.

I figured I should start here before posting it on RR. I've already set up a Ko-Fi and Patreon with the same simple "donate me a coffee" goal for now. I'm gonna publish it at 12:00 AM, GMT+8, with the first two chapters posted until Sunday, where I would then would post on both sites with an...

I do use Grammarly, lol, but editing still takes time because I go "goblin mode" when writing new chapters. Now that I mention it, they're more like manuscripts since they're full of errors and wonky pacing. It's just my way of remembering all the outlines and details before the final touch up...

I can write 5-6 chapters a week, actually, but it gives me a massive migraine. The long and laborious part comes with editing all of them as meticulous as possible, sometimes even rewriting everything from scratch. Technically, I have 35 chapters in my backlog, but they're all very unpolished...

The word count for each of my chapters is 1.5k-1.8k, so I'm worried if I'll run out quickly on the first month. This is why I'm also considering a MWF schedule to give me enough time to write two or more chapters (and to edit the tables that are a staple in litRPGs).

That's all I needed to hear from now on, honestly. I'm glad someone finally pointed out I'm still working on my showing and not telling. Anyway, it's time for me to edit and maybe even rewrite my remaining chapters, which is way harder than it sounds.

Thank you! I must tell you, though, that this will be the last time I'll ask for feedback of a story that isn't even out yet. I'll move to Royal Road by then, so I may not be as active in this site, but any help is appreciated. It's time I grow a spine and see of I can make it.

Yeah, it probably is, but I'm not looking for that at all. I'm just scared my work will flop since I'm not confident posting only 10 of my edited chapters of it at the moment. Someone already told me I should edit or even rewrite all 20 of them before posting, so I'm getting there. I'll just...

Are you open to stories that aren't what you're looking for or nah? I made a pdf of my litRPG novel draft yesterday for convenience purposes in the future.

It's a completely new story, actually, just with similar character names. The reason why I'm back on this is because I spent months writing fanfics on Wattpad and AO3, and although they did gain a fair amount of traction, I wasn't writing wanted I wanted to write (one of them was a Bungou Stray...

Edit: I've decided to ask one last feedback to someone else because I really gotta stop beating around the bush and just post it. Any interaction before this message is me being ultra-cringe, so be warned. For compensation, please look at this cat:

Hmm, sounds a bit like Pony Island without the arcade part and with multiple protagonists.