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Writing Continue Current Story or Start Anew?
Short stories tend to have fewer views and readers. Longer stories aren't guaranteed to be popular, but they're more likely to attract views and readers because they're worth binge-reading, especially for the long-form readers common on SH.- Eldoria
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- Forum: Discussions & Writing Tips
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Looking for Feedback on My Prologue
Using multiple POVs with first-person POV will confuse readers, especially since this is just the prologue. SH readers tend to use third-person limited POV, so you should adapt as long as it doesn't conflict with your narrative style. Furthermore, transitions between POVs should be smoother and...- Eldoria
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- Forum: Story Feedback
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Which do you prefer, long hair or short hair?
My bangs are long enough to cover my forehead. Scary! I can see Sadako's ghost:blob_ghost: in the mirror, when my hair isn't combed properly. Lol. :blob_shock: How about you?- Eldoria
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They (in real life) call me nicknames like a human robot, nerd, and even professor. Not bad...
They (in real life) call me nicknames like a human robot, nerd, and even professor. Not bad nicknames, but those lack intimacy (lack warmth). Unfortunately, what they see may not be what I truly am. The coldest person on the outside can be the warmest person once you get to know them better.- Eldoria
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Eldie-chan?! I got a cuter nickname. Lol:blob_joy:
Eldie-chan?! I got a cuter nickname. Lol:blob_joy:- Eldoria
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It's truly sad how these spammers completely destroy the value of sincerity in simple...
It's truly sad how these spammers completely destroy the value of sincerity in simple interactions, such as simply "commenting." They truly damage human relationships. I hope my heart isn't cold enough to be indifferent or cynical.- Eldoria
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At least your comment was honest, not offering a service or claiming to have read one volume...
At least your comment was honest, not offering a service or claiming to have read one volume with 500 pages an hour ago. Lol- Eldoria
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Spammers Damage Trust Between Authors and Readers
Just go to FictionPress and select the fantasy category. My fiction was recently released and is still on page 2/3 (the update page isn't updated daily).- Eldoria
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- Forum: Reader General
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Looking for Feedback on My Prologue
A short and honest comment, I can't really imagine what your prologue scene is talking about. A monster attack? Why should I care about a monster attack? The hook isn't compelling. Before getting into the action... you should build a concise atmosphere that describes or explains the situation...- Eldoria
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- Forum: Story Feedback
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Spammers Damage Trust Between Authors and Readers
Spammers Damage Trust Between Authors and Readers Recently, I released my fiction on FictionPress to gain exposure and seek organic comments and reviews. It started off pretty well, because within a few days of its release, comments started pouring in. Some were surprised by the plot twist...- Eldoria
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At least farting only happens occasionally... and you won't notice it while you're asleep...
At least farting only happens occasionally... and you won't notice it while you're asleep. However, snoring is different, as it can wake you up to the sound of the night.- Eldoria
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Blood Rose Princess, Vol 2 Chapter 85: The Idealistic Knight Who Failed to Protect — Between...
Blood Rose Princess, Vol 2 Chapter 85: The Idealistic Knight Who Failed to Protect — Between Conscience and Trauma- Eldoria
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Reynard raised his sword. He remembered his promise: failed to protect his wife. “Goodbye!”...
Reynard raised his sword. He remembered his promise: failed to protect his wife. “Goodbye!” "NO!" Detective Clara screamed. "CRACK—" Reynard opened his eyes. Safira had wrapped his arm in dense white mist. "Live, my love!" she floated closer, pressing her misty forehead against Reynard's...- Eldoria
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[Ask a woman] New Age version
If you have trouble imagining such a big figure... at least imagine a son born of his mother's existential decision without any claim from anyone else. It's entirely possible that the son would honour his mother existentially, for his existence is entirely tied to his mother's free choice.- Eldoria
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They're probably writing (including me). Lol
They're probably writing (including me). Lol- Eldoria
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[Ask a woman] New Age version
No... no... men will respect women more. Look at how Jesus loved his mother, Mary.- Eldoria
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- Forum: General Chat
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