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  1. Eldoria

    We need to separate the author's voice from the characters' voices. It would be weird to hear...

    We need to separate the author's voice from the characters' voices. It would be weird to hear Marry say humorous things like "nyaa," "lol," etc., even though she's always cold, mysterious, yet gentle and loving.
  2. Eldoria

    @pangmida I'm back. My previous profile photo felt inappropriate considering what I said on the...

    @pangmida I'm back. My previous profile photo felt inappropriate considering what I said on the forum. *I don't want to indirectly damage the sacredness of the mother-daughter relationship. lol
  3. Eldoria

    A little refreshment is fine. I'll take my profile photo back if it bothers me.

    A little refreshment is fine. I'll take my profile photo back if it bothers me.
  4. Eldoria

    What's the most difficult thing about writing story content?

    You might want to think about the character's design before the name. Many authors name their characters based on their design. Take the characters in One Piece, for example. Oda consistently names his characters based on their designs, such as Bege after a mafia boss, Roronoa Zoro after a...
  5. Eldoria

    Is this offensive?

    I don't understand why you pay attention to small details like racist conversations? There are many sensitive, dark, and brutal topics that often make up the content of fiction and are rarely debated. I mean... we all agree that immorality in fiction is not justified, but it is impossible to...
  6. Eldoria

    Revenge Novels

    Try watching the anime "91 days". It's ethical revenge fiction that truly describes how I felt after closing the final chapter of revenge fiction. https://myanimelist.net/anime/32998/91_Days
  7. Eldoria

    Revenge Novels

    I respect your artistic freedom. But I won't be reading your fiction specifically because of the point below. After all, I've read a lot of revenge tropes, especially in Japanese, Korean, and Chinese fiction. Most of them are simply about satisfying the protagonist's ego. But, frankly, as a...
  8. Eldoria

    Does this blurb make you want to give my story a chance?

    Okay, if you're asking for additional advice: Adjust your synopsis to suit the platform. Don't use "What to Expect" in SH, but you are encouraged to use it in RR. Add "Trigger Warning" if your content is heavy and contains sensitive elements (gore, execution, dark psychology, etc.). Add a...
  9. Eldoria

    Does this blurb make you want to give my story a chance?

    Quite immersive... I can grasp the conflict in your fiction. I'm not offering any advice regarding synopsis content, but your synopsis format should adapt to the format of a web novel. Avoid giant, eye-straining paragraphs. Use concise paragraphs (1-3 sentences). And don't forget to separate...
  10. Eldoria

    Happy New Month!

    Happy New Month!
  11. Eldoria

    Hoshi's Feedback thread

    You should listen to the wise advice of @JayMark if you don't want to get hurt. Lol
  12. Eldoria

    What does Self-insert mean to you?

    I don't know if Light can fit into this category or not, considering the definition of Self-Insert is ambiguous. From the beginning, he was a character intended as a narrative experiment: what if a genius high school student was given the power to determine death through the Death Note? The...
  13. Eldoria

    Happy new month!

    Happy new month!
  14. Eldoria

    What's the most difficult thing about writing story content?

    Well, I understand what you mean... more like a desire to depict the scene in a perfectionist way, but often that is difficult to do because of the author's limitations.
  15. Eldoria

    Breathing freely is a joy in the new month.

    Breathing freely is a joy in the new month.
  16. Eldoria

    2026: What's unique about today?

    Well, breathing freely is a joy.
  17. Eldoria

    What's the most difficult thing about writing story content?

    Well, this is the author's condition, not about the story content.
  18. Eldoria

    What's the most difficult thing about writing story content?

    It was indeed difficult to maintain the internal logic of the world and the coherence of the story. I often flipped through chapters for hours just to check for plot holes or inconsistencies between the new and old chapters.
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    What's the most difficult thing about writing story content?

    Can you explain one thing you find most difficult about writing the content of the story? We don't talk about the market (readers and their preferences), release and promotion, story packaging (cover, etc), or author's condition (mental block, etc). We discuss the content of the story, whether...
  20. Eldoria

    Well, I ate mother's fried chicken. Honestly, when I was a kid, I tended to be picky eaters...

    Well, I ate mother's fried chicken. Honestly, when I was a kid, I tended to be picky eaters (avoiding vegetables, lol). But as an adult, anything Mommy served tasted delicious.
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